难伺候的客户

redred wrote:
温家宝在我省考察防汛抗洪工作
Wen Jiabao inspects the flood prevention and relief work in our province (redred)
Wen Jiabao Inspects the Flood Prevention and Relief Work in Our Province（客）
对方嫌不是大写。

Cheng Peng wrote:

客户付钱了吗？
如果付钱了，我觉得他可能被 rip off 了。

kenny2006woo wrote:



我猜这是新闻，如果是，“我省”翻译成“our province"好像不太好，为什么不直接说出省名呢？

一管之见哈。


[Edited at 2010-08-07 06:21 GMT]

[Edited at 2010-08-07 06:23 GMT]

Laura Liu wrote:





后来看明白了，这是个标题，所以要大写。

redred wrote:

“放心”是rest assured，be assured是什么来的。

redred wrote:


2、8月3日，温家宝在吉林市永吉县三十五中学受灾群众临时安置点看望受伤群众。
2. Wen Jiabao visited injured people in Jilin City Yongji County 35th Middle School, where is a temporary settlement site for flood-affected people, August 3. (redred)
2. August 3, Wen Jiabao visited injured people in Jilin City Yongji County 35th Middle School, which is a temporary settlement site for flood-affected people. （客）
哪条翻译法则规定日期一定要放句首？where是地点指35中学.

redred wrote:
4、“7.29！水质合格！”在吉林市临江门大桥流动水质监测点，温家宝蹲下身来使用电子仪器测量松花江水PH值，仪器显示为7.29，属于正常范围。
4. “7.29! Water is qualified!” Wen Jiabao went down and used electronic instrument measuring PH for Songhuajiang River, the apparatus indicated 7.29, it was midst the normal range. (redred)
4. “7.29! Water is qualified!” Wen Jiabao went down and used electronic instrument measuring PH for Songhuajiang River, the apparatus indicated 7.29, which is midst the normal range. （客）
他改为which is midst the normal range. 我用it有什么问题？一件发生在过去的事，用was有错吗？

redred wrote:
7、总理到来的消息迅速传开，永吉县的群众从四面八方围拢过来。站在泥泞的街道上，温家宝对广大官兵和群众说：“我代表党中央、国务院来灾区看望大家，向奋战在抗洪一线的人民子弟兵表示崇高敬意！”
7. Yongji’s people crowded around as soon as they heard of the message that Premier Wen would arrive at. Wen Jiabao stood in the sludgy street, said to the army officers, soldiers, people: “I represent CPC Central Committee, the State Council to see you, giving the most respectable salute to Chinese people's army who fight in the anti-flood frontline!” (redred)
7. Yongji’s people crowded around as soon as they heard that Premier Wen would arrive. Wen Jiabao stood in the sludgy street, said to the army officers, soldiers, and the masses: “I represent CPC Central Committee, the State Council to see you, giving the most respectable salute to Chinese people's army who fight in the anti-flood frontline!” （客）
heard of:听说、道听旁说；他改为heard that。Premier Wen would arrive at，他删了at，到达小地方是使用arrive at，到达大城市是arrive in。这次用people表示群众,没像第3段那样用the masses,他又有意见了，masses是中国特色的产品，本来用people就可以。

redred wrote:
8、在吉林市，总理亲切地握住群众的手，久久不肯放开，大家心中那份沉甸甸的感动尽在不言中。
8. Premier kindly held people’s hands and didn’t release his grasp for a long time in Jilin City, people couldn’t express their strong affection feeling by any word. (redred)
8. Premier kindly held people’s hands and people didn’t release his grasp for a long time in Jilin City; they couldn’t express their strong affections by any word. （客）
中文是说总理不肯松开抓着群众的手。

[Edited at 2010-08-06 11:10 GMT]

pkchan wrote:

而有中國特色的遣詞用字是最難翻。假如用了這些﹕temporary shelters, flood victims, flood related injuries and deaths, rushed to the scene, disaster relief, comfort the victims, water quality is within normal range, pH values, bridges being washed away, accounts of the disaster situations, quality meals, on hearing the news of Premier Wen's arrival 等英文字眼，必定會被客戶改到滿紙通紅兼不付錢。

[修改时间: 2010-08-06 14:20 GMT]

Alan Wang wrote:



特色遣詞用字反映的往往是思维方式和观点的独特。有的很难英语化而不显得奇怪。下面是一段国内建筑队为申请国外工程的计划书文字：
施工总体部署
第一节 工程目标
一、 部署原则：“先地下，后地上；先土建，后专业；先结构，后维护；先主体，后装修；先房屋，后附属”。
二、 质量方针：提高员工素质，规范工作行为，追求完美品质，满足用户要求。

有人能把一、这段文字译成英文字眼吗？呵呵我是没这个能力。部署原则是不是能译成deployment code?