Glossary entry

Russian term or phrase:

миг, который называется жизнью

English translation:

that fleeting moment we call life

Added to glossary by Andrew Vdovin
May 12, 2007 06:23
17 yrs ago
Russian term

миг, который называется жизнью

Russian to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
Три недели - это всего лишь мгновение в судьбе человека. Или это тот самый миг, который называется жизнью?


Здесь налицо отсылка к известной каждому русскоязычному читателю песне из кинофильма "Земля Санникова":

...Есть только миг между прошлым и будущим -
Именно он называется "жизнь"...


Возникает вопрос: как поступить при переводе? Быть может, следует отыскать какую-нибудь похожую и достаточно известную цитату в английском? Не обязательно из песни.

Proposed translations

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that fleeting moment we call life

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Drink wine.
Wine gives you a taste of the eternal life.
Wine is the magic potion that can restore youth, that
divine season of roses, of intoxication, of sincere friends.
Enjoy this fleeting moment we call life.

http://www.homepages.hetnet.nl/~hansvanrossum/rubaiyat2.html
Peer comment(s):

agree diana bb
21 hrs
Thanks, Diana.
agree Tevah_Trans : Can't help but stay a fan of yours, Alexander. This is the best of choices imho.
2 days 1 hr
Thanks, Tevah_Trans, for your kind words!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "I like your version most, Alexander. Thank you very much for your help! Thanks everybody!!!"
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Life's but a passing shadow

Usually misquoted in this form, though it should be "walking shadow"
From Macbeth, by William Shakespeare.

Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
Peer comment(s):

agree Henry Schroeder : You went even further than I did, amusing that we were thinking along similar lines. Perhaps an anglo-russo-american Prozgeist?
4 mins
Thank you. Is yours a quotation from something? I don't recognize it.
agree Galina F
3 hrs
Thank you.
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15 mins

(brief) moment called life

Or is this a brief moment called life?

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Note added at 16 mins (2007-05-12 06:40:02 GMT)
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THE brief moment
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is that flash what we call life

Three weeks is just a flash in the pan. Or is that (very) flash what we call life?

An attempt at a more poetic rendering of "moment"

I wouldn't worry about the allusion to the song, unless it's actually in the text.
Peer comment(s):

agree Roman Bardachev : the (very) flash we call life. хорошо сказано
4 mins
agree David Knowles : I think this wins over Shakespeare because of the reuse of "flash"
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agree Olga Arakelyan
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agree Andrew Sabak
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agree Faina Furman
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neutral Olga Cartlidge : This is does not capture what the speaker is saying at all. ("Effort/ person that promises great success but fails: His second novel proved to be a flash in the pan. We had high hopes for the new director, but she was a flash in the pan." Answers.com).
2 days 13 hrs
Merriam Webster: briefly successful or popular. The idiom doesn't have anything to do with "promising" except maybe that this brief period of success gives rise to promise. All it say is these 3 weeks were a brief period that wouldn't return.
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a spin we call life

i'd use 'spin' and did not go for any цитату в английском (The notion is well-researched :-)) and applies by all cultures).
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... life - that's what happens while we're making other plans...

This is not a direct answer - but maybe you can use it in structuring the sentence in a way that's suitable, something like: Three weeks - just a fleeting instant in a man's life - or maybe it's exactly what we call life itself - that which happens while we're making plans...

Or whatever.

I still think that Alexander's option is the best of all offered here.
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