Jun 5, 2016 04:43
8 yrs ago
English term

attributes, straits, features, aspects

Non-PRO English Bus/Financial Business/Commerce (general)
Can you tell me which is the most accurate word to use in this sentence?

In our translations, you will find all of the 【attributes】【straits】【features】 【aspects】 that define quality in translation.

I need to choose the best one from the 4 bracketed words. If you think none of them is good, can you recommen another word that fits perfect in the sentence?
Change log

Jun 6, 2016 23:23: Björn Vrooman changed "Level" from "PRO" to "Non-PRO"

Votes to reclassify question as PRO/non-PRO:

Non-PRO (3): Tony M, Charlesp, Björn Vrooman

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Discussion

Tony M Jun 5, 2016:
@ Asker The problem is, your original expression is neither natural nor idiomatic in EN — in fact, it has all the hallmarks of a bad translation! You really do need to get a native speaker of EN to copywrite this sort of sensitive material for you, if you want to appear serious in the translation market.
philgoddard Jun 5, 2016:
As in your other question, none of these is good English.
Is this coursework?
jyuan_us (asker) Jun 5, 2016:
【straits】should be 【traits】 Sorry about the typo error.

Responses

+5
5 hrs
Selected

features/characteristics

but rearrange the sentence so there's no need for a comma

You will find all the features/characteristics that define quality in translation in our work.
(no "of")

or more succinctly and best (imo)

Quality is a defining feature of our translations.

Our translations have all the traits/marks/features that distinguish quality work

Our translations have all the quality you expect

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Note added at 6 hrs (2016-06-05 11:06:02 GMT)
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I agree with Tony that you need to get someone to to the copywriting for you. I've given you the long versions by rearranging your original sentence but would use snappier shorter versions in marketing so something like:

Quality is a defining feature of our work/translations.
Quality is the hallmark of our work/translations
And, since I assume it's clear you're talking about a translation company, I'd use "our work" rather than "our translations"

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Note added at 6 hrs (2016-06-05 11:07:14 GMT)
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typo: to DO (the copywriting)
Peer comment(s):

agree Helena Chavarria
14 mins
Thanks Helena:-)
neutral Tony M : Asker's original text is not natural or idiomatic EN, and i'm afraid your attempted correction can't really correct what is fundamentally wrong with it. Your secondary suggestions are much closer to the mark.
18 mins
Well, I assume this "Quality is a defining feature of our translations" is what they actually want to say!
agree Yasutomo Kanazawa
1 hr
Many thanks:-)
agree Björn Vrooman : Thought about "hallmark" too. I have a certain aversion to "feature(s)," probably because a lot of IT documents are studded with the word.
6 hrs
Many thanks:-) We all have our pet hates!
agree Charlesp
1 day 1 hr
Thanks:-)
agree Harry Crawford
1 day 17 hrs
Thanks:-)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
1 day 6 hrs

aspects

attributes could work, as an alternative.

straits, absoluten not (how did that drop into here?)

features, no.

aspects, the best of the four
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