Jul 20, 2018 10:29
5 yrs ago
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Spanish term
United Kingdom
Russian, Spanish and Polish to English
Native in: English (Variant: British)
Works in: Russian to English, Spanish to English, Polish to English, and 2 more.
del uso que ses le dé a los mismos
Spanish to English
Law/Patents
Other
Privacy Policy
Context: "[Organización] es responsable de recabar sus datos personales, del uso que se le dé a los mismos y de su protección."
In a Mexican NGO's Privacy Policy. My target audience is heterogeneous (and not necessarily native English speakers), so I would like to know what this phrase means rather than its translation if possible.
In a Mexican NGO's Privacy Policy. My target audience is heterogeneous (and not necessarily native English speakers), so I would like to know what this phrase means rather than its translation if possible.
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 +6 | (and for ) the use that is made of them… |
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Proposed translations
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(and for ) the use that is made of them…
[Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them and their protection.
(Some users might prefer another version with an Oxford comma)
[Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them, and their protection.
NB: As this query is posted in the Spanish to English translation section, that is what I'm suggesting. For an explanation in Spanish of the sentence, it should be posted in the ES-ES section.
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Note added at 12 mins (2018-07-20 10:41:46 GMT)
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Some might also prefer "collecting" rather than "gathering"... but to me it's six of one and half a dozen of the other.
(Some users might prefer another version with an Oxford comma)
[Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them, and their protection.
NB: As this query is posted in the Spanish to English translation section, that is what I'm suggesting. For an explanation in Spanish of the sentence, it should be posted in the ES-ES section.
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Note added at 12 mins (2018-07-20 10:41:46 GMT)
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Some might also prefer "collecting" rather than "gathering"... but to me it's six of one and half a dozen of the other.
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