près du feuillus aux marcassins

English translation: near to the trees where the young wild boars made their home/lived

17:13 Oct 18, 2016
French to English translations [PRO]
Poetry & Literature / Fairy tale
French term or phrase: près du feuillus aux marcassins
Hi,

I'm translating an old fairy tale from French to British English and am having trouble with a few words at the end of the opening sentence. Please see below:

"Par un beau jour de cueillette aux myrtilles, les habitants de Bellebroussaille ont découvert dans la forêt un bébé aux belles joues rondes endormi près du feuillus aux marcassins."

I'm a bit stumped by the structure, but am thinking along the lines of "...near to the deciduous trees among the young wild boars". I'm not 100% sure though. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks in advance :)
Matt Valentine
Norway
Local time: 03:46
English translation:near to the trees where the young wild boars made their home/lived
Explanation:
Depending on how poetic one is allowed to be, maybe something like 'leafy grove' instead of trees. It sounds more like a home to me.
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Helen Shiner
United Kingdom
Local time: 02:46
Grading comment
Thanks, Helen :)
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3 +4near to the trees where the young wild boars made their home/lived
Helen Shiner
4near the deciduous trees with young wild boars
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near the deciduous trees with young wild boars


Explanation:
http://www.larousse.fr/dictionnaires/francais-anglais/marcas...

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Canada
Local time: 21:46
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  ormiston: the plural is usually boar
10 mins

neutral  Germaine: back-translation: près des arbres à feuilles caduques... and I'm puzzled by the use of "with".
21 hrs
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near to the trees where the young wild boars made their home/lived


Explanation:
Depending on how poetic one is allowed to be, maybe something like 'leafy grove' instead of trees. It sounds more like a home to me.

Helen Shiner
United Kingdom
Local time: 02:46
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Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 72
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Thanks, Helen :)

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  ormiston: I like 'leafy grove' but feel it should be 'near' (or else 'close to'
57 mins
  -> 'near the' is better than 'near to the', I agree.

agree  Nikki Scott-Despaigne: Or even "by the trees where" to be a bit more olde worlde. (I'd love to suggest "wild young bores" but that wouldn't be serious!).
2 hrs
  -> Yes, 'by' is better. ;) to the rest.

agree  philgoddard
8 hrs
  -> Thanks, Phil

agree  Carol Gullidge: ... where the wild-boar piglets roam (?). But I also agree with Tony and Nikki. And forget about the nitty-gritty of "broadleaved", etc, as this is quite irrelevant in a children's story - unless it proves otherwise later on in the text!
14 hrs
  -> Thanks, Carol, yes, I made that point from the start. In the end, what to do with the young wild boars is going to depend on the rhythm of the text, and the age of the children the book is aimed at.
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