Oct 6, 2016 11:52
7 yrs ago
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German term

Sprühst Du schon?

German to English Marketing Medical: Pharmaceuticals
Ich bin auf der Suche nach einer passenden Übersetzung der Aussage "Sprühst Du schon?".
Es handelt sich um den Flyer eines Augensprays.
Die meisten benutzen eben AugenTROPFEN, demnach soll die Aussage auch darauf abzielen, wieviel einfacher doch eine Anwendung eines Sprays im Gegensatz zum umständlichen Tropfen ist.
Im Deutschen ist die Frage natürlich stark angelehnt an die Werbeaussage eines schwedischen Möbelhauses. Deshalb überlege ich, ob es nicht sinnvoll wäre, sich komplett davon zu lösen. Aber irgendwie will mir nichts passendes einfallen...
Hat jemand eine Idee?

Danke Euch!

LG
Sabine
Change log

Oct 6, 2016 11:52: Yana Dovgopol changed "Vetting" from "Needs Vetting" to "Vet OK"

Discussion

Anne Schulz Oct 7, 2016:
As a side note You might consider to give a more or less literal translation (+/- translator's note) rather than offering a catchy slogan at the price of 4 words translation, where an ad writer would charge hundreds or thousands of dollars.
Susanne Schiewe Oct 6, 2016:
Drop the drops. Just spray. ?
BrigitteHilgner Oct 6, 2016:
To spray or not to spray ... I would never use the stuff (I doubt that it's convenient to use), but as a slogan, I prefer Phil Goddard's suggestion.
philgoddard Oct 6, 2016:
Let us spray.

Proposed translations

+7
33 mins
Selected

Eye spray. Do you?

As a word play on "I spray. Do you?"
Peer comment(s):

agree Michael Bailey
1 hr
agree Armorel Young : Deserves points for cleverness even if it doesn't get used
1 hr
agree Paul Cohen : Eye like it.
2 hrs
agree Cilian O'Tuama : Aye
2 hrs
agree Steffen Walter
3 hrs
agree Alexandra Timms (X)
7 hrs
agree David Hollywood : very neat take on it :)
14 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Love this one! Thanks a lot for this and all other creative answers!"
52 mins

Have you envisioned spraying?

for now.
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1 day 16 mins

Quick and easy spray to get an eye full

or eyeful
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