la pienezza di un cielo disteso e sereno come un fiore sbocciato
English translation: under skies wide open like a full-blown flower
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in the clear sky which spreads out like a full-blown flower Explanation: your take is not bad, or amid(st) the fullness of a clear sky which spreads out like a full-blown/blooming/blossoming flower -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 hrs (2014-05-29 13:04:05 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- since the rum is maturing, maybe Under a clear sky would be more appropriate than in -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 hrs (2014-05-29 13:05:28 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Above the clouds, not between according to the text-like the air plane which climbs above the clouds to seek the clear sky |
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completeness of a serene sky, tranquil/relaxed as a blossom flower Explanation: puoi tradurlo in molti modi differenti |
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peer agreement (net): +1blooming flowers set into vast calm skies... Explanation: hai cambiato l'ordine di sereno e disteso. E' impossibile una traduzione letteraria, ecco un tentativo di renderlo un po' piu' inglese: .... clouds that look like blooming flowers set into (a background of) calm skies... |
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or under skies wide open looking like full-blown flowers Explanation: And here I age, among the timeless clouds, or under skies wide open looking like full-blown flowers. a first attempt... to keep the most of it in, with some musicality, while minimising the apparent italian inconsistency between the clouds (which are meant, I guess, to indicate some high lands) and the clear sky not native, and just my personal try at it, but couldn't resist :) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 5 days (2014-06-04 08:06:24 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- contenta che ti sia piaciuta :) |
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