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Russian to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Idioms / Maxims / Sayings | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Mark Berelekhis United States Local time: 16:10 | ||||||
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4 +1 | was warming up my heart. |
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4 | echoed (furiously) with every beat of my heart |
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echoed (furiously) with every beat of my heart Explanation: You're right, it's an awful image. I suggest rewriting. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 48 mins (2013-01-24 21:48:20 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- You mean the city under the falling leaves one? |
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was warming up my heart. Explanation: I would translate it this way. |
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