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3 | Industrial Cluster Formation in Related Semiconductor Fields |
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field or fields possible wording Explanation: I assume this is the title of some sort of business analyis or report. One option is be 'Industrial Cluster Formation in Semiconductor-related Sectors' (or 'in a Semiconductor-related Sector' if only one sector (field) is involved) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 hrs (2008-08-29 11:17:30 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Oops: *analysis* and *option is* |
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field or fields Industrial Cluster Formation in Related Semiconductor Fields Explanation: a possibility |
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field or fields field Explanation: "The basic definition of an industry cluster is a geographical concentration of industries that gain performance advantages through co-location." And . . . "Clusters are geographic concentrations of interconnected companies, specialized suppliers, service providers, and associated institutions in a *particular field* that are present in a nation or region." The heading needs work. If this is about *a* cluster: "Formation of (a) Industrial Cluster in Semiconductor-related Field" If this is about clusters in general: "Formation of Industrial Cluster(s) in (the)Semiconductor-related Field" Reference: http://www.planning.unc.edu/courses/261/leveen/ Reference: http://www.isc.hbs.edu/econ-clusters.htm |
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