документальное введение

English translation: formal integration

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Russian term or phrase:документальное введение
English translation:formal integration
Entered by: Dmitry Goykhman

14:49 Mar 7, 2008
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial - Business/Commerce (general)
Russian term or phrase: документальное введение
Рассмотреть вопрос участия ZZZ-а в акциях фирмы YYY и ее **документального введения** в группу ZZZ.

Any good ideas on how to put this in English?
Dylan Edwards
United Kingdom
Local time: 16:39
formal integration
Explanation:
integration seems a better term than induction which refers to hall of fame, for example
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Dmitry Goykhman
Local time: 11:39
Grading comment
Thank you Dmitry, thanks everyone.
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Summary of answers provided
4official absorbtion into ZZZ group
The Misha
4reflection in the company records
Siriol Hugh-Jones
4formal integration
Dmitry Goykhman
3official induction
Mark Berelekhis


  

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4 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
official induction


Explanation:
Since 'official' is what they really mean, why not make it easier on the reader?

Mark Berelekhis
United States
Local time: 11:39
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PRO pts in category: 56
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19 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
official absorbtion into ZZZ group


Explanation:
Mark is right, official is the way to go. However, in my mind induction most vividly associates with a hall of fame or a secret society, not with a business transaction.

The Misha
Local time: 11:39
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5 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
reflection in the company records


Explanation:
I would translate the passage as: "to review the question of ZZZ's ownership of shares in YYY and the reflection of the latter in group ZZZ's company records."

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Note added at 33 mins (2008-03-07 15:23:31 GMT)
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On reflection, I actually prefer "The Misha"'s version, though I hate to admit I'm wrong!

Siriol Hugh-Jones
Local time: 16:39
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Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  The Misha: Great English, fairly weak grasp of the subject matter
15 mins
  -> See acknowledgement re preference for "The Misha's" version. I acted in haste.
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
formal integration


Explanation:
integration seems a better term than induction which refers to hall of fame, for example

Dmitry Goykhman
Local time: 11:39
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8
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Thank you Dmitry, thanks everyone.
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