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only those ... of those

English translation: Re-word sentence as below.

13:24 Sep 9, 2007
English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Law/Patents - Games / Video Games / Gaming / Casino
English term or phrase: only those ... of those
two "those" in a line, please help with rehrasing

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3.6. The licensee must:
3.6.1. Carry out ***only those types of activities of those ***mentioned in item 3.2 of chapter 3 of these Licensing conditions, which are indicated in the license.
Alexander Onishko
Selected answer:Re-word sentence as below.
Explanation:
Of the types of activities mentioned in item 3.2 of chapter 3 of these Licensing conditions, carry out only those which are indicated in the license.
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Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 19:30
Grading comment
Thank you very much, Jack, and all answerers !
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4 +2Re-word sentence as below.
Jack Doughty
4the types of activities mentioned in
Empty Whiskey Glass
4of those
Jennifer Levey


  

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6 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
Re-word sentence as below.


Explanation:
Of the types of activities mentioned in item 3.2 of chapter 3 of these Licensing conditions, carry out only those which are indicated in the license.

Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 19:30
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 20
Grading comment
Thank you very much, Jack, and all answerers !

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Carol Gullidge: exactly!
33 mins
  -> Thank you.
agree  Bernhard Sulzer: of the ...activities mentioned in item 3.2....carry out only those which - that's the ticket (IMHO)!
3 hrs
  -> Thank you.
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6 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
the types of activities mentioned in


Explanation:
3.6. The licensee must:
3.6.1. Carry out only the types of activities mentioned in item 3.2 of chapter 3 of these Licensing conditions, which are indicated in the license.

Empty Whiskey Glass
Local time: 21:30
Native speaker of: Native in BulgarianBulgarian
PRO pts in category: 4
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27 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
of those


Explanation:
I think the most elegant solution is simly to delete the first 'of those'.

3.6. The licensee must:
3.6.1. Carry out only those types of activities mentioned in item 3.2 of chapter 3 of these Licensing conditions, which are indicated in the license.

Jennifer Levey
Chile
Local time: 14:30
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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