Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

while it was fairy tales where

English answer:

and such miracles happen every day in fairy tales

Added to glossary by NancyLynn
Nov 15, 2006 03:42
17 yrs ago
English term

while it was fairy tales where

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
“Does he really think this tiny marble can turn into a flying carpet or something?” I thought. And then I remembered I hadn’t read any fairy tales for ages, while it was fairy tales where such miracles happened every day and every minute.

Dear native English speakers!
Please advise on the phrase. I'm not really sure it sounds natural enough, but I'm no NES myself.
I'll appreciate any suggestions.

Responses

+8
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and such miracles happen every day in fairy tales

And then I remembered I hadn’t read any fairy tales for ages, and such miracles happen every day in fairy tales.

Peer comment(s):

agree RHELLER : yes or "and that is where miracles happen every day"
6 mins
yes, thanks Rita :-)
agree Refugio
1 hr
agree Ken Cox : or 'happen all the time'. Rewording is certainly desirable.
4 hrs
I agree with you there, Ken! thanks
agree jerrie
5 hrs
agree Mark Nathan
5 hrs
agree Sophia Finos (X)
15 hrs
agree Alexandra Tussing
16 hrs
agree Kari Foster : Yes; the problem with the original was the use of "while".
1 day 17 hrs
I thought so too - thanks!
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+3
8 mins

while it was IN fairy tales...

Then I remembered that I hadn't read a fairy tale in ages while it was in fairy tales that such miracles happened every day and every minute.
Peer comment(s):

agree zaphod : AS it was In fairy tales
45 mins
Or whereas. Thanks zaphod!
agree pomiglia
2 hrs
Thanks pomiglia!
agree Alexandra Tussing
17 hrs
Thank you Rusinterp!
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10 mins

As fairy tales were the good place for these miracles to happen

As here is an adverb like While. However the use of each one is different from the other in this context.
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11 mins

while it was in fairy tales that...

...such miracles happened day in and day out.

"day in and day out", IMO, is better expression to represent "always happening".
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