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English translation: does not promote sufficient glucose absorbtion into the tissues from the blood

16:12 Oct 24, 2005
English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO]
Medical - Medical (general)
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Type 2 diabetes is caused because your insulin does not achieve that glucose enters into the tissues or because you do not have enough insulin. There are medications used for trying to solve both cases.

I think that there is something wrong with this part : Type 2 diabetes is caused because your insulin does not achieve that glucose enters into the tissues

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Sanjiv Sadan (X)
Local time: 00:26
Selected answer:does not promote sufficient glucose absorbtion into the tissues from the blood
Explanation:
This is what I would suggest as an improvement.

As a now insulin-dependant type II diabetic, the problem is that your body does not produce enough insulin for a balanced blood glucose level. Initial treatment is diet and exercise, possibly supplemented with tablets to stimulate insulin production. Two of the inter-related factors are body weight and regular exercise.
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Dave Calderhead
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Local time: 20:56
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Thanks to all of you great guys.
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4 +1does not promote sufficient glucose absorbtion into the tissues from the blood
Dave Calderhead
5Type II diabetes results from tissue insensitivity to the insulin (produced by the pancreas)
Michael Barnett
4See explanation below.
Jack Doughty
4agree--sounds funny
jccantrell


  

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See explanation below.


Explanation:
Yes, there is. "achieve that it enters" does not sound right. Should be something like "insulin does not cause glucose to enter the tissues" or "does not release glucose into the tissues".

Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
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agree--sounds funny


Explanation:
How about

Type 2 diabetes is caused because your insulin does not more {transfer} glucose into the tissues or ...

My shot.

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Note added at 18 mins (2005-10-24 16:30:25 GMT)
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that should be MOVE glucose. Jeez, no WONDER this stuff sounds funny!


    Reference: http://www.diabetes.org/type-2-diabetes.jsp
jccantrell
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does not promote sufficient glucose absorbtion into the tissues from the blood


Explanation:
This is what I would suggest as an improvement.

As a now insulin-dependant type II diabetic, the problem is that your body does not produce enough insulin for a balanced blood glucose level. Initial treatment is diet and exercise, possibly supplemented with tablets to stimulate insulin production. Two of the inter-related factors are body weight and regular exercise.


Dave Calderhead
Netherlands
Local time: 20:56
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 32
Grading comment
Thanks to all of you great guys.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Armorel Young: "used for trying to solve" is none too brilliant either - why not just "medications can help in both cases"?
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  -> Thanks, Armorel, (;-{)> Good point
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Type II diabetes results from tissue insensitivity to the insulin (produced by the pancreas)


Explanation:
The issue in DM Type II is insulin resistance. The receptors on the fat cells that are supposed to recognize insulin are not functioning.

Michael Barnett
Local time: 14:56
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