Apr 23, 2006 09:06
18 yrs ago
English term
Sanjiv Sadan (X)
Where concentrations are found at depth mining is underground using shafts, inclined roadways and tunnels.
English
Science
Mining & Minerals / Gems
Where concentrations are found at depth mining is underground using shafts, inclined roadways and tunnels.
Is this sentence okay? If not, could you pls explain what exactly author wants to say?
Is this sentence okay? If not, could you pls explain what exactly author wants to say?
Responses
| 4 +7 | see exålanation |
William [Bill] Gray
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| 3 +5 | sentence |
David Sirett
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Change log
Apr 23, 2006 13:54: NancyLynn changed "Term asked" from "sentence" to "Where concentrations are found at depth mining is underground using shafts, inclined roadways and tunnels."
Responses
+7
9 mins
William [Bill] Gray
Norway
Norway
Native in English
&
English
Norway
Working with words
Native in: English 
Works in: English, Norwegian to English, Danish to English, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
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8
English term (edited):
sentence
Selected
see exålanation
"Where concentrations [of the ore, or whatever it is that is being mined] are found at depth (that is, underground), mining is [performed] underground using shafts, inclined roadways and tunnels."
Purely logically (for me) I would choose to have the tunnels after the shafts, then the inclined roadways, but it may also remain as it is.
These mining methods will vary according to exactly HOW deep underground the ore is.
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Note added at 11 mins (2006-04-23 09:17:27 GMT)
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Oops, sorry, I hit a neighbouring key (on a Norwegian keyboard): should be "explanation"!
Purely logically (for me) I would choose to have the tunnels after the shafts, then the inclined roadways, but it may also remain as it is.
These mining methods will vary according to exactly HOW deep underground the ore is.
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Note added at 11 mins (2006-04-23 09:17:27 GMT)
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Oops, sorry, I hit a neighbouring key (on a Norwegian keyboard): should be "explanation"!
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks to all of you for your great help."
+5
10 mins
English term (edited):
sentence
sentence
It's OK, though a comma after "depth" would improve it. Where concentrations (dense deposits) of X are found deep in the ground, underground (rather than open-cast/pit) mining is used to work them.
Peer comment(s):
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Morad Safe (X)
1 hr
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| agree |
Karina Garcia Pedroche
4 hrs
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| agree |
NancyLynn
: Please put in the term in the answer box, rather than "see explanation" or "sentence". Thanks.
4 hrs
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When I answered, the question box said "sentence", so there was no "term" to enter--and the asker did not ask for a term.
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| agree |
RHELLER
: great explanation
5 hrs
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Raging Dreamer
6 hrs
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