Apr 14, 2016 09:29
8 yrs ago
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English term
The prescription volume uptakes
English to French
Bus/Financial
Medical: Pharmaceuticals
The prescription volume uptakes of anti-obesity medications recently launched in the US are given below.
Je traduis le rapport annuel d'une entreprise pharmaceutique, merci de votre aide pour la traduction de cette partie de phrase.
Je traduis le rapport annuel d'une entreprise pharmaceutique, merci de votre aide pour la traduction de cette partie de phrase.
Proposed translations
(French)
4 +3 | Les chiffres relatifs à l'utilisation de médicaments anti-obésité sur ordonnance | Bertrand Leduc |
5 -1 | La quantité de médicaments prescrits pour faire maigrir | Christine HOUDY |
Proposed translations
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Les chiffres relatifs à l'utilisation de médicaments anti-obésité sur ordonnance
suggestion
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ou ''Les chiffres relatifs à l'utilisation de médicaments anti-obésité obtenus sur ordonnance''
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Note added at 11 minutes (2016-04-14 09:41:23 GMT)
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ou ''Les chiffres relatifs à l'utilisation de médicaments anti-obésité obtenus sur ordonnance''
Peer comment(s):
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PLR TRADUZIO (X)
: à la consommation ?
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Merci PLR, oui, on parle aussi de ''consommation pharmaceutique''
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Drmanu49
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Merci Manu !
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Didier Fourcot
: La consommation en volume, ça évitera les chicaneries des matheux qui diront que ce sont des nombres et pas des chiffres
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Merci Didier !
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Tony M
: I'm not sure this tells the whole story; I suspect it possibly means the amount actually dispensed, compared with the amount presscribed; I don't know how the company would know that, but it would be more compatible with the EN syntax. Pls see discussion
20 hrs
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2 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
-1
3 hrs
La quantité de médicaments prescrits pour faire maigrir
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La quantité de médicaments anti-obésité prescrits
Ce n'est pas la peine de stipuler sur ordonnance !
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La quantité de médicaments anti-obésité prescrits
Ce n'est pas la peine de stipuler sur ordonnance !
Peer comment(s):
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Bertrand Leduc
: À mon avis ''anti-obésité'' est le terme à utiliser dans un tel contexte (voir ANSM, EMA...), sinon le ST dirait ''Drugs to make you thin''. Niveau de confiance de 5 ??
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Oui, pour anti-obésité ;-)
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PLR TRADUZIO (X)
: "pour faire maigrir" et "5" ????? et Wikipedia ?????
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Sorry about it!
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Tony M
: 'slimming drugs' would be a gross mistranslation of the s/t here!
16 hrs
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Discussion
Thank you for your help!
Indeed, the EN syntax gave me some trouble here, but based on your suggestions, I've chosen the option n.2 (also seeking to understand with the context).
Thanks again!
In any event, I would advise caution when interpreting the EN syntax here, in order to avoid any risk of a translation error.
Note carefully the word order: "prescription volume uptake" — it is specifically NOT '...uptake of prescription medicaments'
This not being my specialist field, and as this is also EN-US, I can only hazard a guess at 2 possible meanings, based purely on the syntax here:
1) The extent to which patients 'take up' (i.e. get dispensed) the medication prescribed for them. This would be a logical interpretation of 'prescritpion uptake', though it seems a curious statistic to use, and probbaly on the drug company wouldn't have access to.
2) The volume of these new drugs that are being 'taken up' by doctors by the act of prescribing them. This would seem to me a more likely statistic for the company to be using: "We made the product, to what extent is it being used?" (as well as one more likely to be available to them) — BUT in that case I would have expected the word order to be 'prescription uptake volume'.