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Coordinadora de la comisión de modernización y transformación

English translation: Coordinator of the Transformation Committee

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Spanish term or phrase:Coordinadora de la comisión de modernización y transformación
English translation:Coordinator of the Transformation Committee
Entered by: BettinaVaamonde

20:57 May 19, 2015
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Education / Pedagogy / Transcripts
Spanish term or phrase: Coordinadora de la comisión de modernización y transformación
Notas del colegio universitario de los Teques Cecilio Acosta

Se certifica la firma que antecede de la ciudadana Profesora XXX quien para la fecha del otorgamiento del presente documento era, como en el se expresa: Coordinadora de la comisión de modernización y transformación y directora del Colegio Universitario de los Teques Cecilio Acosta
BettinaVaamonde
Canada
Local time: 10:57
Coordinator of the Transformation Committee
Explanation:
The Spanish here is redundant, given that "transformación" necessarily would generally imply "modernización" in such a context.

So no need to replicate the redundancy in English, methinks.

And I'd go with "committee" rather than "commission" in this academic context (i.e., academic institutions typically organize "committees" rather than "commissions" in the English-speaking world).
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Robert Forstag
United States
Local time: 10:57
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Gracias nuevamente Robert!
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3 +3Coordinator of the Transformation Committee
Robert Forstag
3 +1Coordinator of the transformation and modernization commission
Helena Chavarria


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48 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +3
Coordinadora de la modernización y transformación
Coordinator of the Transformation Committee


Explanation:
The Spanish here is redundant, given that "transformación" necessarily would generally imply "modernización" in such a context.

So no need to replicate the redundancy in English, methinks.

And I'd go with "committee" rather than "commission" in this academic context (i.e., academic institutions typically organize "committees" rather than "commissions" in the English-speaking world).

Robert Forstag
United States
Local time: 10:57
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 463
Grading comment
Gracias nuevamente Robert!
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you Robert


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Patricia Fierro, M. Sc.
28 mins
  -> Gracias, Patricia.

agree  EirTranslations
8 hrs

agree  Sian Cooper: Although assuming that 'modernisation' is redundant is questionable: you can definitely transform without modernising, particularly in big organisations with committees...
14 hrs
  -> Yes, but I think it requires a fair amount of sophistry to conceive of t. without m., and I would be stunned on the grounds of sheer common sense if that were the intention here. That said, thanks for your agree. 😊
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44 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
Coordinator of the transformation and modernization commission


Explanation:
I think I would translate it literally, changing the position of 'modernization' and 'transformation'.

DRAFT WHITE PAPER
ON
LOCAL GOVERNMENT TRANSFORMATION AND MODERNIZATION 2013

http://www.ttparliament.org/documents/2207.pdf

I don't know if the following link will work

http://unctt.org/wp-content/uploads/2013/03/MLGPolicyBook-WE...

Creating a More Modern and Efficient Government

In 2015, the government is undertaking a review of its Information and Information Technology organization, benchmarking against peer organizations. This review will ensure the effective and efficient use of Information Technology (IT) to ***transform and modernize ***public services; drive IT value for money in the delivery of high-quality, optimal services; and manage potential risks inherent in a rapidly changing technological landscape.

http://www.fin.gov.on.ca/en/budget/ontariobudgets/2015/ch2b....

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Note added at 47 mins (2015-05-19 21:44:24 GMT)
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Institutional Transformation and Modernization Program of the Energy Sector III

http://www.iadb.org/en/projects/project-description-title,13...

Transformation & Modernization of your service management in 9 STEPS

http://es.slideshare.net/FujitsuBe/transformation-and-modern...


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Note added at 53 mins (2015-05-19 21:50:31 GMT)
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You'll find it in the abstract at the end, before the references.

In Venezuela, the process of modernization and transformation
that has taken place in higher education, from Sucre educational missions and
Alma Mater, created by the Bolivarian government, have marked a milestone,
differentiating our country from the rest of Latin America.

http://periodicos.uesb.br/index.php/praxis/article/viewFile/...

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Note added at 10 hrs (2015-05-20 07:37:17 GMT)
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As Patricia has rightly pointed out, it should be 'Coordinator of the Transformation and Modernization Committee'; 'Modernisation' for the UK.

Helena Chavarria
Spain
Local time: 16:57
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 144
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you Helena


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Patricia Fierro, M. Sc.: Transformation and Modernization Commission
33 mins
  -> You're right of course. I completely forgot about capitalising the words. Thanks for pointing that out :)

agree  lugoben: either are valid. In English shorter syntax form has to add coordinator
1 hr
  -> I finally decided to put 'Coordinator' at the beginning because I didn't like the sound of '...Commission Coordinator and Director...'. Thank you, lugoben :)
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