Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

Technical and Operations Director

Arabic translation:

مدير التشغيل / العمليات والشؤون الفنية

Added to glossary by Ahmad Abdul-hafeeZ
Sep 19, 2013 13:47
10 yrs ago
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English term

Technical and Operations Director

English to Arabic Other Military / Defense
Job title: Technical and Operations Director
is it
مدير عام العمليات والتقنيات
مدير الأمور الفنية والعملياتية

Discussion

Awad Balaish Sep 19, 2013:
Thank you Stephen
I totally agree with you, this is a noticeable incorrect phrase, I was about to suggest corrections: 1- technical works and operations director 2- Technical operation director. The asker has to respond and comment.
Stephen Franke Sep 19, 2013:
Original English text is awkward; rewrite needed Greetings.

May one observe that that original English text is awkward (apparently written by an engineer or "techie," rather than a technical writer) and deserves a re-write for better clarity.

Possibilities, to show the ambiguous nature of the original text, include:

Technical = technology or technologies

"Technical and Operations" = could have been intended as "Technical Operations" (with no "and" inserted)

"Director of Technical Operations" = original writer's intent?

A re-write for clarity and simplicity would be especially beneficial if the translation is intended for a reader who does not have a matching technical or engineering background in the subject area. In other words, a process of conversion & translation as follows: original "Engineering English" => plain & clear English => plain & clear Arabic.

The need for such conversion & rendition became very evident for several translation & interpreting projects when I was last working in Riyadh, KSA on a defense / military-related program.

Hope this helps. Khair, in shaa' Allah. Today is Thursday, 19 September 2013.

Regards,

Stephen H. Franke
San Pedro, California
(Late of al-Riyadh, Jeddah, and al-Hofuf, EP)

Proposed translations

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مدير التشغيل / العمليات والشؤون الفنية

من الضروري تعديل النص الإنجليزي ليتوافق مع ما هو متعارف عليه بحيث تكون التمسية مقبولة شكلاً ومضموناً

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Note added at 56 mins (2013-09-19 14:44:12 GMT)
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ليس تعديل النص الإنجليزي وأنما التصرف مجير العمليات أو التشغيل والشؤون الفنية
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agree Heba Abed
4 hrs
Thank you Heba Abed
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks Awadh"
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مدير العمليات الفنية

مجرد اقتراح
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40 mins

المدير الفني (التقني) والتشغيلي/العمليات الفنية (التقنية) والتشغيلية

المدير الفني (التقني) والتشغيلي/العمليات الفنية (التقنية) والتشغيلية
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58 mins

المدير الفني ومدير العمليات

مدير يختص بالشئون الفنية وإدارة العمليات سوياً
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agree Heba Abed
4 hrs
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