Oct 25, 2012 22:01
11 yrs ago
English term
Jakub Koralewski
Toastmasters Sopot Leaders
English to Polish
Bus/Financial
Advertising / Public Relations
name of club
The organization is www.toastmasters.org it is public speakers' club.
We are creating a new club in Sopot in Poland.
We were thinking of the name of the new club.
The suggested name was:
TOASTMASTERS SOPOT LEADERS
There were voices that this name was gramatically incorrect in English, but they did not include further explanation.
How does this name sound to you?
Would you suggest some word order changes and why or why not?
What is your experience with creating names for Toastmasters club?
We are creating a new club in Sopot in Poland.
We were thinking of the name of the new club.
The suggested name was:
TOASTMASTERS SOPOT LEADERS
There were voices that this name was gramatically incorrect in English, but they did not include further explanation.
How does this name sound to you?
Would you suggest some word order changes and why or why not?
What is your experience with creating names for Toastmasters club?
Proposed translations
(Polish)
| 5 | Toastmasters Sopot Leaders |
SlawekW
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References
| TOASTMASTERS SOPOT LEADERS |
Mr Koralewski
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Proposed translations
19 mins
Toastmasters Sopot Leaders
nazwa własna, nie tłumacz, podobnie jak samych Toastmasters ogólnie
Reference comments
37 mins
Reference:
TOASTMASTERS SOPOT LEADERS
Sławek, thank you for quick reaction :)
The question is not about translation this time, but about language correctness in creating the name itself - TOASTMASTERS SOPOT LEADERS.
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Is this name correct or should it be changed.
At this moment it appears to me that it would suggest that the club embraces people who are leaders of the city of Sopot and that the city is on the subject of the toastmasters,
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but it could be also understood that it is just about the leaders of the sopot city and the word toastmasters is just a traditional addition (usually used in the names of the Toastmasters clubs).
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The author of the name had an intention to express the idea that we are LEADERS in the field we are dealing with here (speaking and leadership) that we are from SOPOT and that we belong to TOASTMASTERS.
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Does the name TOASTMASTERS SOPOT LEADERS convey this idea, or should the name be changed to convey this idea? (or should the idea be readjusted?)
The question is not about translation this time, but about language correctness in creating the name itself - TOASTMASTERS SOPOT LEADERS.
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Is this name correct or should it be changed.
At this moment it appears to me that it would suggest that the club embraces people who are leaders of the city of Sopot and that the city is on the subject of the toastmasters,
-
but it could be also understood that it is just about the leaders of the sopot city and the word toastmasters is just a traditional addition (usually used in the names of the Toastmasters clubs).
-
The author of the name had an intention to express the idea that we are LEADERS in the field we are dealing with here (speaking and leadership) that we are from SOPOT and that we belong to TOASTMASTERS.
-
Does the name TOASTMASTERS SOPOT LEADERS convey this idea, or should the name be changed to convey this idea? (or should the idea be readjusted?)
Discussion
Z tego, co widzę na
http://www.d70toastmasters.org.au/district-70/divisions/cent...
wnioskuję, że wystarcza Area + numer. Nie wiem, czy wyraz Leaders jest niezbędny.
Możliwe, że powinniście zapytać World Headquarters o wytyczne.