максимальная информативность при ограниченном объеме

English translation: include/provide as much information as possible in the limited space available withinthe article

13:02 Nov 4, 2009
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Science - Printing & Publishing / scientific writing
Russian term or phrase: максимальная информативность при ограниченном объеме
- обеспечить максимальную информативность при ограниченном объеме статьи.

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Nik-On/Off
Ukraine
Local time: 01:37
English translation:include/provide as much information as possible in the limited space available withinthe article
Explanation:
something along those lines, perhaps?

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Note added at 29 mins (2009-11-04 13:31:15 GMT)
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sorry, missed a space there....

include/provide as much information as possible in the limited space available within the article
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Libero_Lang_Lab
United Kingdom
Local time: 23:37
Grading comment
Thank you so much!
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Summary of answers provided
3 +2include/provide as much information as possible in the limited space available withinthe article
Libero_Lang_Lab
4 +1furnish/provide as much information as possible within the confines of the article
Judith Hehir
3 +1provide maximum information within limited article volume
Igor Blinov
4cover as much as possible in a limited article
Deep-one
3highly condensed ... [given the] space limitations
Rachel Douglas
3 -1to provide maximal informativity within the limited wordage
bukevych


Discussion entries: 5





  

Answers


3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
provide maximum information within limited article volume


Explanation:
smth like that

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Note added at 5 мин (2009-11-04 13:07:10 GMT)
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... within limited volume of an article

Igor Blinov
Russian Federation
Local time: 01:37
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Alina EN-RU
2 mins
  -> Спасибо.
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7 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): -1
to provide maximal informativity within the limited wordage


Explanation:
...

bukevych
Ukraine
Local time: 01:37
Native speaker of: Native in UkrainianUkrainian, Native in RussianRussian

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
disagree  Libero_Lang_Lab: doesn't really read like idiomatic English.
2 hrs
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28 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +2
include/provide as much information as possible in the limited space available withinthe article


Explanation:
something along those lines, perhaps?

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Note added at 29 mins (2009-11-04 13:31:15 GMT)
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sorry, missed a space there....

include/provide as much information as possible in the limited space available within the article

Libero_Lang_Lab
United Kingdom
Local time: 23:37
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Thank you so much!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  DTSM
18 mins

agree  Rachel Douglas: And it might be possible to omit "within the article" or somehow combine those two prepositional phrases: "in the article's limited space", or smething like that.
2 hrs
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
furnish/provide as much information as possible within the confines of the article


Explanation:
...

Judith Hehir
United States
Local time: 18:37
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Libero_Lang_Lab: like it. a touch more elegant than my suggestion
41 mins
  -> Thanks, Dan.
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21 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
highly condensed ... [given the] space limitations


Explanation:
In view of your discussion entries, it seems it might work to ditch a literal translation altogether and say:

... a highly condensed bibliographical format ...

with or without, in the different instances, some additional phrase like "given [because of] the article's space limitations".

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Note added at 21 hrs (2009-11-05 10:34:34 GMT)
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Once it's established, you could refer to it again as "the highly condensed bibliographical format" or even, perhaps, as "the 'shorthand' bibliographical format."

Rachel Douglas
United States
Local time: 18:37
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 36
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
cover as much as possible in a limited article


Explanation:
as simple as that

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Note added at 4 дн (2009-11-08 15:25:30 GMT)
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in the article's limited space

Deep-one
Local time: 01:37
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Rachel Douglas: But the asker said this refers to the bibliographical list. Also, referring to "space" is desirable, because "limited article" could also be a qualitative characterization.
50 mins
  -> "in an article limited on space"???
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