que escapa pela fresta de um dique

English translation: that flows through the breach of a dyke

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Portuguese term or phrase:que escapa pela fresta de um dique
English translation:that flows through the breach of a dyke
Entered by: Nick Taylor

21:03 Jun 16, 2013
Portuguese to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting / article on art in Brazil
Portuguese term or phrase: que escapa pela fresta de um dique
Hi everyone,

I am translating an article entitled, "Motion through the center. Notes on contemporary art scene in Midwestern Brazil since 2000."
(The title is in English). The phrase appears in the final passage of the article:

A delicadeza nessas obras é desconcertante e, como tende toda a delicadeza, ela transborda em generosidade. Esses artistas produzem um exercício poético da generosidade, não da generosidade como benevolência disposição daquele indulgente, nem como uma espécie de qualidade moral, mas a generosidade como esse olhar que, mesmo frente ao ínfimo, transborda, como um uma torrente **que escapa pela fresta de um dique**. Muito mais há de verter.

I have read that 'fresta' is 'interstice' in English, but to refer to the interstice of a dyke seems pretty obscure. Does the Portuguese sound obscure too? Or might there be a more natural translation?

Thanks for your help!
Lindsay Spratt
France
Local time: 18:43
that flows through the breach of a dyke
Explanation:
that flows through the breach of a dyke

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Note added at 17 hrs (2013-06-17 14:55:41 GMT)
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Water flows through Manitoba dike breach
http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/manitoba/story/2011/05/14/mb-d...
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3 +1which escapes through the crack/ gap/ breach
Alex Alexandre
4like a flood that leaks through a crack in a dike . . .
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4that flows through the breach of a dyke
Nick Taylor


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which escapes through the crack/ gap/ breach


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Alex Alexandre
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like a flood that leaks through a crack in a dike . . .


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like a flood that leaks through a crack in a dike . . .

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that flows through the breach of a dyke


Explanation:
that flows through the breach of a dyke

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Note added at 17 hrs (2013-06-17 14:55:41 GMT)
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Water flows through Manitoba dike breach
http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/manitoba/story/2011/05/14/mb-d...

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Local time: 17:43
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