конструкции существенные для устойчивости

English translation: defects in int./ext. load-bearing[-carrying] structures [that are] important for stability[/safety]

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Russian term or phrase:конструкции существенные для устойчивости
English translation:defects in int./ext. load-bearing[-carrying] structures [that are] important for stability[/safety]
Entered by: Fernsucht

04:17 Apr 19, 2012
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Tech/Engineering - Construction / Civil Engineering
Russian term or phrase: конструкции существенные для устойчивости
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Под «Конструктивным дефектом» понимается не связанное с естественным износом непредвиденное разрушение или физическое повреждение конструктивных элементов (фундамента, колонн, перекрытий, балок, несущих стен, и т.д.) застрахованного имущества или здания, сооружения, постройки, в котором расположено застрахованное имущество (при страховании помещений), вследствие дефектов ВНУТРЕННИХ И ВНЕШНИХ НЕСУЩИХ КОНСТРУКЦИЙ СУЩЕСТВЕННЫХ ДЛЯ УСТОЙЧИВОСТИ застрахованного ииущества (здания, жилого помещения, сооружения, постройки), и невозможности в связи с этим пользования застрахованным имуществом (зданием, жилым помещением, сооружением, постройкой) по назначению, в соответствии с санитарно-эпидемиологическими и иными нормами, устанавливающими требования к жилым и иным помещениям (зданиям, сооружениям, постройкам).

Мой вариант - ... defects of internal and external structural components being material to (critical for?) ensuring the stability of the insured property
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defects in int./ext. load-bearing[-carrying] structures [that are] important for stability[/safety]
Explanation:
defects in int./ext. load-bearing[-carrying / supporting] structures [that are] important for stability[/safety] of the property insured

as far as your version is concerned:
несущих is missing here, structural component is not the same as load-bearing / supporting structure
I would avoid use "being" here
ensure stability, not "the stability" imho
material/critical might be a good fit as well
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Fernsucht
United States
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Спасибо за помощь и разъяснения
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Summary of answers provided
5 +3defects in int./ext. load-bearing[-carrying] structures [that are] important for stability[/safety]
Fernsucht
5due to flaws in external and internal structural components that are essential for stiffness of
Julia Fedotova (X)
4external and internal critical structures
Alexander Kondorsky


  

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16 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +3
существенные для устойчивости
defects in int./ext. load-bearing[-carrying] structures [that are] important for stability[/safety]


Explanation:
defects in int./ext. load-bearing[-carrying / supporting] structures [that are] important for stability[/safety] of the property insured

as far as your version is concerned:
несущих is missing here, structural component is not the same as load-bearing / supporting structure
I would avoid use "being" here
ensure stability, not "the stability" imho
material/critical might be a good fit as well

Fernsucht
United States
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 52
Grading comment
Спасибо за помощь и разъяснения

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Jack Doughty
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agree  Levis: +1 really two thumbs up!
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agree  Leonid K.U.
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25 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
due to flaws in external and internal structural components that are essential for stiffness of


Explanation:
I wouldn't use the word 'material', 'critical' sounds better for me, my own version was 'essential'

I believe the sentence requires 'that' as otherwise it becomes unclear (for me)

Julia Fedotova (X)
Latvia
Local time: 00:05
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 4
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41 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
external and internal critical structures


Explanation:
critical в строительстве как раз и обозначает такие структуры

Alexander Kondorsky
Russian Federation
Local time: 00:05
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 98
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