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Jan 2 10:04
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Italian term

in maniera scrupolosa e assoluta

Non-PRO Italian to English Other Law: Contract(s)
Contract ( betting)


osservare, in maniera scrupolosa e assoluta, nell’attività di sottoscrizione dei contratti di conto di gioco e e di rivendita della carta di ricarica, il divieto di intermediazione previsto e punito dalla legge n. 401/1989, nonché il divieto di operazioni di accesso al conto di gioco dei giocatori per la raccolta e l’intermediazione di giocate ai..
Proposed translations (English)
4 [suggestion for the whole thing]
3 +1 scrupulously and unconditionally
4 -1 Painstaking
3 with the utmost seriousness
Change log

Jan 2, 2024 12:48: writeaway changed "Field (write-in)" from "Contract " to "(none)"

Proposed translations

12 hrs
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[suggestion for the whole thing]

It is possible to rewrite whole paragraphs of a legal document so that it reads well while remaining faithful to the original. Just because it's long, wordy and repetitious doesn't mean your translation should be.

As Adrian points out, 'in maniera scrupulosa e assoluta' is redundant - you either comply with the law, or you don't.

So I suggest:

In accordance with law no. 401/1989, refrain from acting as an intermediary in signing gaming account contracts and reselling top-up cards, and from accessing players' accounts to collect stakes, either directly or as an intermediary...

The last few words of my translation may need tweaking, as you've omitted the end of the sentence.

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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "thanks a lot"
-1
46 mins

Painstaking

I'd say "scrupulously and completely".
So the text would go: "scrupulously and completely (respect/abide/comply with)... the prohibition of..."
Peer comment(s):
disagree Jasmina Towers : I don't think 'painstaking' makes sense here
1 hr
neutral philgoddard : Your answer is different from your explanation.
1 hr
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+1
3 hrs

scrupulously and unconditionally

to observe, scrupulously and unconditionally, in the course of /throughout/ the activity of underwriting / executing -> sigining up to.... (nell’attività di sottoscrizione), the ban, prohibition or restraint *on*...

-> in scrupulous and unconditional manner is 'otiose' (redundant), as in the Italian word - taught by my Südtiroler teacher of Italian - for a business: ne-gozio = no leisure (AmE) leezure-time.

Pening comments from ProZ regulars, other permutations & combinations for assoluta and that don't quite work: absolutely, utterly, throughout - though the latter could be sneaked (Daily Mail broadsheet-cum-tabloid: snuck) in to preface the activity.

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Note added at 3 hrs (2024-01-02 13:08:02 GMT)
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Pending comments..
Example sentence:

scrupulously observe the ceasefire and the separation of forces.

Unless agreed otherwise, you must unconditionally observe any and all intellectual and industrial property rights vested in the products delivered

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Peer comment(s):
agree Paul O'Brien
11 mins
neutral philgoddard : As you say, it's redundant.
1 hr
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5 hrs

with the utmost seriousness

qui si parla di osservare alcuni divieti

Example sentence:

Please observe this prohibition with the utmost seriousness.

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