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17th Translation Contest: "The Sounds of Silence" » English to Indonesian

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Source text in English

A theme of the age, at least in the developed world, is that people crave silence and can find none. The roar of traffic, the ceaseless beep of phones, digital announcements in buses and trains, TV sets blaring even in empty offices, are an endless battery and distraction. The human race is exhausting itself with noise and longs for its opposite—whether in the wilds, on the wide ocean or in some retreat dedicated to stillness and concentration. Alain Corbin, a history professor, writes from his refuge in the Sorbonne, and Erling Kagge, a Norwegian explorer, from his memories of the wastes of Antarctica, where both have tried to escape.

And yet, as Mr Corbin points out in "A History of Silence", there is probably no more noise than there used to be. Before pneumatic tyres, city streets were full of the deafening clang of metal-rimmed wheels and horseshoes on stone. Before voluntary isolation on mobile phones, buses and trains rang with conversation. Newspaper-sellers did not leave their wares in a mute pile, but advertised them at top volume, as did vendors of cherries, violets and fresh mackerel. The theatre and the opera were a chaos of huzzahs and barracking. Even in the countryside, peasants sang as they drudged. They don’t sing now.

What has changed is not so much the level of noise, which previous centuries also complained about, but the level of distraction, which occupies the space that silence might invade. There looms another paradox, because when it does invade—in the depths of a pine forest, in the naked desert, in a suddenly vacated room—it often proves unnerving rather than welcome. Dread creeps in; the ear instinctively fastens on anything, whether fire-hiss or bird call or susurrus of leaves, that will save it from this unknown emptiness. People want silence, but not that much.

The winning entry has been announced in this pair.

There were 9 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase, 3 of which were selected by peers to advance to the finals round. The winning entry was determined based on finals round voting by peers.

Competition in this pair is now closed.


Entries (9 total; 3 finalists) Expand all entries

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Entry #22792 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
Winner
Voting points1st2nd3rd
5710 x46 x25 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.263.27 (15 ratings)3.25 (16 ratings)
Entry tagging:
 
 
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
  • 4 users agreed with "likes" (4 total agrees)
+4
2
mendambakan keheningan
Flows well
bagus, men​dambakan k​eheningan ​cocok deng​an kalimat​nya.
Johan Cahyadi
Entry #23189 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
517 x410 x23 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.443.47 (15 ratings)3.40 (15 ratings)
Entry tagging:
 
 
  • 2 users entered 3 "like" tags
  • 1 user agreed with "likes" (1 total agree)
+1
1
secara sadar mengungkung diri
Flows well
aliezar
desis api, kicau burung, maupun gemeresik daun,
Flows well
Reinitha Amalia [Reinitha Lasmana]
tetapi tidak sebegitunya.
Flows well
Reinitha Amalia [Reinitha Lasmana]
Entry #23614 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
Yusuf Akhmadi
Yusuf Akhmadi
Indonesia
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
415 x45 x211 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.233.33 (15 ratings)3.13 (15 ratings)
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  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
perasingan
Good term selection
Reinitha Amalia [Reinitha Lasmana]


Non-finalist entries

The following entries were not selected by peers to advance to finals-round voting.

Entry #22807 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.933.06 (16 ratings)2.80 (15 ratings)
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  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
  • 4 users agreed with "likes" (4 total agrees)
+4
menyelimuti
Good term selection
Regi2006
Entry #23138 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.772.82 (17 ratings)2.72 (18 ratings)
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  • No "like" tags
Entry #22790 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.752.75 (4 ratings)2.75 (4 ratings)
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Entry #22603 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
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Entry2.662.56 (18 ratings)2.76 (17 ratings)
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Entry #23879 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
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Entry2.542.64 (14 ratings)2.43 (14 ratings)
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  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
tapal kuda
Good term selection
Good alter​native for​ sepatu ku​da
Regi2006
Entry #22375 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Standard-Indonesia
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.172.00 (4 ratings)2.33 (3 ratings)
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