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Am andern Tag war die Hochzeit. Während der Trauung hörte man die Braut weinen, es schien, als ahne sie ihr trauriges Schicksal voraus, während der Bräutigam, Herr Peter Salomon Curius, selbstbewußt und höhnisch lächelnd um sich blickte. Die Sache war die, daß es kein Geschöpf auf Gottes Erdboden gab, dem er sich nicht überlegen gefühlt hätte.

Als das Hochzeitsmahl zu Ende war, wurde Engelhart mit den andern Kindern ins Freie geschickt. Es war ein lieblicher Garten hinter dem Haus, voll Apfel- und Kirschenbäumen. In dem dumpfen Trieb aufzufallen, sonderte sich Engelhart von der Gesellschaft ab und schritt in einer den Erwachsenen abgelauschten Gangart in der Tiefe des Gartens hin und her. Was ihm unbewußt dabei vorgeschwebt hatte, geschah; die jüngste Cousine folgte ihm, stellte sich ihm gegenüber und blitzte ihn mit dunkeln Augen schweigend an. Nach einer Weile fragte Engelhart um ihren Namen, den er wohl schon einige Male gehört, aber nicht eigentlich begriffen hatte. Sie hieß Esmeralda, nach der Frau des Onkels Michael in Wien, und man rief sie Esmee. Dieser Umstand erweckte von neuem Engelharts prickelnde Eifersucht, und er fing an, prahlerische Reden zu führen. Der Lügengeist kam über ihn, zum Schluß stand er seinem wahnvollen Gerede machtlos gegenüber, und Esmee, die ihn verwundert angestarrt hatte, lief spöttisch lachend davon.

Um diese Zeit faßten seine Eltern den Beschluß, ihn, obwohl er zum pflichtmäßigen Schulbesuch noch ein Jahr Zeit hatte, in eine Vorbereitungsklasse zu schicken, die ein alter Lehrer namens Herschkamm leitete. Herr Ratgeber, der große Stücke auf Engelharts Begabung hielt und große Erwartungen von seiner Zukunft hegte, war ungeduldig, ihn in den Kreis des Lebens eintreten, von der Quelle des Wissens trinken zu sehen. Er dachte an seine eigne entbehrungs- und mühevolle Jugend. Noch in den ersten Jahren seiner Ehe liebte er gehaltvolle Gespräche und gute Bücher und bewahrte eine schwärmerische Achtung für alles, was ihm geistig versagt und durch äußerliche Umstände vorenthalten blieb.

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Entry #15490 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Andreea Sepi, MCIL (X)
Andreea Sepi, MCIL (X)
Germany
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Entry3.974.14 (7 ratings)3.80 (5 ratings)
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privea în juru-i sigur pe sine şi cu zâmbet zeflemitor
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Krisztina Vladu
Vedeţi, pentru dânsul
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Krisztina Vladu
cu paşii apăsaţi pe care văzuse că-i au oamenii mari
Flows well
Krisztina Vladu
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Posibilitatea pe care o întrezărise
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Foarte ele​gantă într​eaga propo​ziție.
Krisztina Vladu
pe care îl mai auzise de fapt de câteva ori
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Alexandra Krah
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avea o părere grozavă
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Krisztina Vladu
prin forţa împrejurărilor exterioare
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and good t​erm select​ion
Alexandra Krah
Entry #18938 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
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Entry3.673.33 (6 ratings)4.00 (5 ratings)
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pe care îl deprinsese de la adulți
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Raluca-Ioana
îl fulgeră tăcută cu ochii ei cei negri
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foarte fru​moasa si c​orecta tra​ducere
Alexandra Krah
însă efectiv nu-l pricepuse
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Alexandra Krah
invidia ce-l rodea
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Krisztina Vladu
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începu cu lăudăroșeniile
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Krisztina Vladu
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Duhul minciunii puse stăpânire pe el
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Adriana Sandru
respect frenetic
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Raluca-Ioana
Entry #19537 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Romania
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Entry3.603.40 (5 ratings)3.80 (5 ratings)
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o grădină minunată
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Alexandra Krah
Minciuna îl cuprinse în mraja ei
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Stil
Alexandra Krah
deşi mai avea încă un an până să atingă vârsta de şcoală
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Krisztina Vladu
care era foarte încrezător în calităţile lui Engelhart
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Alexandra Krah
îi plăcu să poarte discuţii elevate
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Alexandra Krah
pentru tot ceea ce îl depăşea intelectual
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Alexandra Krah
Entry #16243 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Romania
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Entry3.253.17 (6 ratings)3.33 (6 ratings)
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tumultul searbăd
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Roxana L.
dar nu îl înţelesese cu adevărat
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Alexandra Krah
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faţă de tot ce nu avusese parte pe plan intelectual sau îi fusese refuzat din cauza circumstanţelor externe.
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Krisztina Vladu
Entry #20084 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Romania
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Entry3.173.00 (6 ratings)3.33 (6 ratings)
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Aceasta situaţie stârni din nou în Engelhart furnicături de gelozie şi începu să ţină discursuri lăudăroase
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Adriana Sandru
Entry #15574 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Romania
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Entry3.052.60 (5 ratings)3.50 (6 ratings)
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își punea mari speranțe în viitorul acestuia
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Alexandra Krah
Se gândea la tinerețea sa plină de privațiune și strădanie
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Raluca-Ioana
Entry #16363 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Romania
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Entry3.003.00 (6 ratings)3.00 (5 ratings)
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ospăţul de nuntă
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Roxana L.
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se propti în faţa lui
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Krisztina Vladu
îl fulgeră în tăcere cu ochii ei negri
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Alexandra Krah
Entry #16433 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Romania
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fălos
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Krisztina Vladu
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paşi furaţi de la adulţi
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Krisztina Vladu
Entry #18109 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
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îl fulgeră cu ochii ei negri
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Alexandra Krah
pe care probabil îl auzise deseori
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Alexandra Krah
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Minciuna puse stăpânire pe el
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Krisztina Vladu
o luă la fugă
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Krisztina Vladu
intrat
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Krisztina Vladu
Entry #19060 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Romania
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E drept ca ii auzise numele de cateva ori
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Krisztina Vladu
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Technical Trans
Technical Trans
Philippines
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