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Source text in English

Sunday Mornin' Comin' Down

Well, I woke up Sunday morning
With no way to hold my head that didn't hurt.
And the beer I had for breakfast wasn't bad,
So I had one more for dessert.
Then I fumbled in my closet through my clothes
And found my cleanest dirty shirt.
Then I washed my face and combed my hair
And stumbled down the stairs to meet the day.

I'd smoked my mind the night before
With cigarettes and songs I'd been picking.
But I lit my first and watched a small kid
Playing with a can that he was kicking.
Then I walked across the street
And caught the Sunday smell of someone's frying chicken.
And Lord, it took me back to something that I'd lost
Somewhere, somehow along the way.

On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.

In the park I saw a daddy
With a laughing little girl that he was swinging.
And I stopped beside a Sunday school
And listened to the songs they were singing.
Then I headed down the street,
And somewhere far away a lonely bell was ringing,
And it echoed through the canyon
Like the disappearing dreams of yesterday.

On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.

There were 6 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase.

Entries submitted in this pair were rated on a per-segment basis. Listed below are all submitted translations of each individual source text segment.

Submitted segment translations

Translations submitted for each source text segment are listed below. Segments have had surrounding punctuation stripped, and the resulting identical segments have been grouped together, so each listed translation should differ, but the difference may be subtle (eg. internal punctuation or diacritics).

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Source text segment #2

Well, I woke up Sunday morning
With no way to hold my head that didn't hurt.
And the beer I had for breakfast wasn't bad,
So I had one more for dessert.
Rank by:
+7 | -3
The line "With no way to hold my head that didn't hurt" has a clever double meaning since the phrase "to hold one's head" can mean "to feel good about one self" or "walking with dignity and/or integrity". However it can also be interpreted literally.
+1
Attention aux erreurs de trad sur le 2e vers "No way...that didn't hurt" signifie "toutes les façons me faisaient mal". En + "hold my head" c'est aussi "tenir la tête haute", double meaning! Les meilleures trad ne rappellent que c'est une chanson ! Brav
Bueno, me desperté el Domingo por la mañana Sin saber como mantener mi cabeza sin dolor. Y la cerveza tomada en el desayuno estuvo más o menos. De ese modo, comí un postre más.
The only one that I can actually sing to the original tune
the arabic translation is not correct.
This translation could have been more economical and poetic especially
لم أجد طريقة and على سبيل التحلية
I think my translated poetry/song with source text as above is better than 6 followers(entries). Unfortunately, my translated poetry/song could not be showed on the page. Ha..ha..
-1
Bueno, me desperté el Domingo por la mañana sin manera de sostener mi cabeza para que no doliera . Y la cerveza que tuve para el desayuno no estaba mal, así que tuve una más para el postre.
-1
Λοιπόν ξύπνησα, της Κυριακής το πρωινό
δίχως τόπο να κρατάω το κεφάλι μου που να μη με πονάει.
Και η μπίρα που είχα πιει το πρόγευμα δεν ήτανε
-2
Y bien, me levante el domingo por la mañana sin nada que sostubiera mi cabeza que no dolia. Y la cerveza que tome por desayuno no estaba mala, asi que me tome otra de postre.

Translations of this segment (6 total; 6 unique)

Pazar sabahı uyandım Kafamı nasıl tutarsam tutayım ağrıyordu. Ve kahvaltıda içtiğim bira fena değildi, Onun için tatlıyla birlikte bir tane daha içtim
Pazar sabahı uyandığımda Ağrıdan çatlıyordu başım. Ve fena değildi kahvaltım olan bira, Bu yüzden tatlı niyetine, içtim bir tane daha
Pazar sabahı kalktığımda Başımı ağrıdan kaldıramadım. Kahvaltıda içtiğim güzel biradan Tatlı niyetine bir tane daha aldım
Uyandım Pazar sabahı Başımı ağrımadan hareket ettiremediğim bir durumda. Kahvaltı niyetine içtiğim bira fena değildi, O yüzden tatlı niyetine devirdim bir tane daha
Pazar sabahı uyandığımda Başımın ağrımamasına imkân yoktu. Kahvaltı niyetine içtiğim bira fena değildi, Ben de bir tane daha içtim, üzerine tatlı oldu
Yine bir Pazar sabahı uyanmıştım Başımı ne yöne çevirsem acı veriyordu. Kahvaltılık biram da fena değildi, Tatlı niyetine bir tane daha aldım
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