basados en el transmite romanticismo y la naturalidad
English translation: that is perfect for romance, featuring enticing natural scents such as
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| Spanish to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Marketing / Market Research / Marketing material for a fragrance brand | |||||||
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that convey a romantic tone and natural fragrances Explanation: I would suggest -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2017-04-05 00:31:21 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- and to continue: such as rose, jasmine, etc. |
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peer agreement (net): +2| basados en el transmite romanticismo y la naturalidad como that is perfect for romance, featuring enticing natural scents such as Explanation: I think that that a freer approach is needed here in order to produce English that not only sounds natural, but that works in the context of a text designed to sell the product in question. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 59 mins (2017-04-05 00:18:03 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Pardon: ...that ARE perfect for romance... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 hrs (2017-04-05 03:25:07 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- OR: ...that are perfect for romance, and that feature nature's own enticing aromas: ... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 hrs (2017-04-05 03:42:07 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- In order to avoid an unseemly repetition of "perfect," you could render "perfectos para esta primavera" as "to get you ready for Spring." If you approach this as a transcreation rather than as a translation task (which I think is often appropriate in translating marketing texts, and especially when the copy is as dreadfully written as it is here) then there really are a lot of possibilities, and what I have suggested can certainly be improved upon. |
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