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English translation: See under explanation, below.
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см. ниже Explanation: Я бы подправил так: A city where people will live a happy life and raise their children, where active lifestyle will be available to both children and adults, where sports will become an integral part of life. |
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19 mins confidence:
See under explanation, below. Explanation: A city where people will be able to live happily and raise their children, children and adults alike can have an active lifestyle, and sports is an integral part of life. Main points of editing: - "will be able to" sounds natural, even if not in the original - There's no need to repeat "where" - "their children" sounds better - "an active lifestyle" requires the article - Once you've established the future tense with the first verb, you don't have to put all the verbs in the future; it's understood. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 21 mins (2008-06-14 11:46:25 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- The last "life", you could make "daily life", but that begins to be editorial rewriting, rather than translation. |
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The city with all opportunities for its people to live happily and raise their children and for its Explanation: s -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 13 mins (2008-06-14 11:39:14 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- The city with all opportunities for its people to live happily and raise their children and for its minor and adult residents to lead an active life and to enjoy sports as an integral part of their life -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 23 hrs (2008-06-15 10:41:28 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- corrected: A city with all opportunities for its people to live happily and raise their children, where minor as well as adult residents can lead an active life and enjoy sports as an integral part of their lifestyle REFERENCES: Lead an active life Toronto - People Tagged With: Lead a healthy and active life ... toronto.ourfaves.com/people/Tags/Lead_a_healthy_and_active_life - 20k Part of a lifestyle www.dcr.virginia.gov/state_parks/health.shtml - 16k - and many other links |
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