Polonski, Song of a Gipsy Woman

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07:33 Jan 9, 2003
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / poetry
Russian term or phrase: Polonski, Song of a Gipsy Woman
Пожалуйста, помогите найти перевод/перевести первые две строчки из песни Я. Полонского "Песня цыганки"
Мой костер в тумане светит,
Искры гаснут на ветру
Alla Kobkova
Russian Federation
Local time: 15:30
English translation:цитата:
Explanation:
http://www.pitt.edu/~slavic/sli/admin/guitars.html
My campfire lights up in the night,
Sparks fade as they fly...
No one meets us in the night,
And we part on the bridge.
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Igor Kreknin
Local time: 11:30
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5 +2my variation...
Deborah Hoffman
5 +1My version:)
Montefiore
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цитата:


Explanation:
http://www.pitt.edu/~slavic/sli/admin/guitars.html
My campfire lights up in the night,
Sparks fade as they fly...
No one meets us in the night,
And we part on the bridge.

Igor Kreknin
Local time: 11:30
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 8
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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +2
my variation...


Explanation:
My campfire burns amidst the fog
Sparks fade away in flight
Noone will come to meet us here
We'll part on the bridge tonight
(Deborah Zaccaro 2003)

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Note added at 2003-01-09 17:16:38 (GMT)
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Я кстати очень люблю ету песню.

Deborah Hoffman
Local time: 04:30
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Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 36

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agree  Montefiore
10 hrs

agree  Alexandra Tussing
11 hrs
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16 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
My version:)


Explanation:
Through night's fog the campfire glitters,
Sparks extinguished in cold air,
Empty darkness gives us jitters,
We will part, and all is fair...

Montefiore
United States
Local time: 01:30
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Native speaker of: Russian
PRO pts in category: 8

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Vents Villers: :)
47 mins
  -> :) thank you, Ingemaars....
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