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06:53 Jun 16, 2020 |
German to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Marketing / Market Research | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Catriona C. Germany | ||||||
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to be deployed/for wherever emergency assistance is needed in the future Explanation: "...to discover cutting-edge products to be deployed/for wherever emergency assistance is needed in the future" Another tricky "pun" (of sorts) - the "Einsatzort" of course refers to where the products are used, but also to the "Einsatzort" (in the sense of "deployment") for the emergency services using them, in my view (presuming this is the same trade fair as from yesterday's questions). Ideally, we'd get a sense of both meanings in the translation somewhere, both the sense that the products are practical and to be used, and that they are specifically linked to the emergency services. If you really want to lean into the pun, I'd got for "to be deployed", but if you'd prefer a slightly more tasteful version, a simple "for" might be better! I'm not 100% happy with the wordiness of this, but I'll pop back with a streamlined version if one comes to mind! And in the meantime, maybe this will spark a train of thought that leads to a slightly more elegant result :) |
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to respond to future emergencies Explanation: 'Einsatzort' is literally 'site of deployment' but I would change the focus from location to action in English to sound more natural. I take it this is the same text about emergency services posted elsewhere which is why I've said 'future emergencies.' Example sentence(s):
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...experiencing the latest innovations for saving lives Explanation: Hi Martina. It seems to me that anything with 'future' infers that there will be coming disasters we don't experience now a days. This may be true, but is not an attractive marketing impulse. |
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for future emergency services needs Explanation: "That's why every other year thousands of visitors from all over Austria and neighboring countries won't pass up the opportunity to explore our products for future emergency services needs." |
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Place of action of the future Explanation: Wörtlich Also Place of action for the future |
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