Nadelstiche auf das Geschäftsmodell

English translation: sniping at their business model

18:56 Dec 30, 2015
German to English translations [PRO]
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German term or phrase: Nadelstiche auf das Geschäftsmodell
Hi Colleagues,

I'm a bit puzzled by the idiom "Nadelstiche auf das Geschäftsmodell" and how best to render it in English. Here's the context:

Die Schweizer Grossbanken waren im Vergleich mit den angelsächsischen Konkurrenten nochmals tiefer kapitalisiert und sind dadurch ein grösseres Risiko eingegangen.
Das Vermögensverwaltungsgeschäft funktionierte aber gleichzeitig als mehr oder weniger konstante Cashflow-Maschine.
Damit die UBS aus ihrer derzeitigen Situation herausfindet, ist sie auf ein reibungsloses Funktionieren der Vermögensverwaltung angewiesen.
Da braucht man nicht noch Nadelstiche auf das Geschäftsmodell, um es einmal zurückhaltend auszudrücken.

It's Swiss German from a newspaper article.

Any help would be thoroughly appreciated.

Paul
Paul Stewart
United Kingdom
Local time: 09:33
English translation:sniping at their business model
Explanation:
Maybe
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Armorel Young
Local time: 09:33
Grading comment
Thanks for this. Reflecting on the genre and the local, I decided to go with this in the end.
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Summary of answers provided
3We/they don't need anyone punching/burning holes in their well laid plans, to put it mildly
Ramey Rieger (X)
3having the business model subjected to needle pricks of criticism
Michael Martin, MA
3sniping at their business model
Armorel Young
3holes poking / picking in the business model
Julia Burgess
3cast aspersions
gangels (X)


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We/they don't need anyone punching/burning holes in their well laid plans, to put it mildly


Explanation:
...scratching the polish on their well-oiled machine
...putting salt in the coffee...


Ramey Rieger (X)
Germany
Local time: 10:33
Native speaker of: English
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having the business model subjected to needle pricks of criticism


Explanation:
Here's another go.. Working out a solution that's closer to the German source worked out better than expected. In my opinion, anyway.

Happy 2016!

"To put it charitably, the last thing one needs at this point is having the business model subjected to incessant needle pricks of criticism."

Michael Martin, MA
United States
Local time: 04:33
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Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman, Native in EnglishEnglish
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neutral  gangels (X): pinpricks, not needle
7 hrs
  -> Pinpricks is more common for sure. But this one works as well.
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sniping at their business model


Explanation:
Maybe

Armorel Young
Local time: 09:33
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 115
Grading comment
Thanks for this. Reflecting on the genre and the local, I decided to go with this in the end.
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17 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
holes poking / picking in the business model


Explanation:
pick a hole / holes in = find a fault or flaw in
Also, poke a hole/holes in. (Point 27 in the reference below)

In the context of the question: Their business model hardly needs further holes poking/picking in it...

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Note added at 17 hrs (2015-12-31 12:52:50 GMT)
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A more literal take, but still correct idiomatically in English.

Example sentence(s):
  • As soon as I presented my argument, he began to pick holes in it.

    Reference: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/hole
Julia Burgess
United Kingdom
Local time: 09:33
Native speaker of: English
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Asker: Thanks Julia. Much appreciated!

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cast aspersions


Explanation:
no need to cast aspersions on

or heap scorn on
or to denigrate

many others

gangels (X)
Local time: 02:33
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in GermanGerman
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