lorsque l’on respire en synchronicité
English translation: when we breathe in unison
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|  Selected response from: Katarina Peters Canada Local time: 23:18 | ||||||
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peer agreement (net): +1When our breathing is synchronised Explanation: Put fairly simply |
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when we breathe in harmony / our breath is in harmony Explanation: Just an idea. |
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10 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +1
peer agreement (net): +1when we're breathing in time / together Explanation: Aha — you got that job then? ;-) I thought I'd give it a wide berth, and I'm glad I did now. I certainly wouldn't use 'synchronicity', which in EN is (to my mind) far too dry and technical for this sort of text. When people do the same thing at the same time, we often say they are 'in time'; 'together' might be a simpler solution, but open to ambiguity. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 minutes (2014-04-23 18:26:11 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- 'when we're breathing as one' might be a slightly more poetic way of expressing it too. |
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13 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +7
peer agreement (net): +7when we breath in unison Explanation: another suggestion |
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