08:08 Aug 22, 2019 |
English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO] Other / punctuation | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Tony M France Local time: 12:59 | ||||||
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4 +4 | : (or .) colon or full stop |
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4 +3 | use a colon here |
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use a colon here Explanation: I would say that a full-stop COULD be sued, but is perhaps not ideal, as the iideas run on: "...two parts: one of which is..." You might arguably do better even to use just a comma instead. But the sentence is rather long, and i'd be inclined to use a full-stop to split it up more, in which case, you could then start again with "One of these parts is to..." Please note that there are several other issues with your text as it stands. |
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