17:27 May 14, 2009 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Music / comments about a music student interpretation | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Anton Konashenok Czech Republic Local time: 21:28 | ||||||
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... is representative of the keyboard instruments on which ... Explanation: I think the original author would have said "is an example of" if s/he hadn't already used the word "example" twice! |
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is a typical example of Explanation: . |
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suggests Explanation: ... |
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indicates the type of keyboard instrument on which this fugue may have been performed.... Explanation: The organ used in the example ***is indicative of*** a keyboard instrument on which this fugue may have been performed, though it is not necessary for the performance to be on a baroque-style instrument, (as in a performance of this piece on the piano). I'd rewrite the sentence: "The organ used in the example indicates the type of keyboard instrument on which this fugue may have been [originally] performed. It does not, however, need to be performed on only baroque-style instruments (and could, for instance, be played on a piano)." -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2009-05-14 18:52:06 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- On second thought . . . it looks like the "It" refers to the organ and not the fugue... so I'd change it to read, "This fugure, however, does not need to be performed on only baroque-style instruments (and could, for instance, be played on a piano)." Something to that effect. |
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is sort of vaguely like; well, the original instrument probably had a keyboard Explanation: I think this is an example of a writer using words in a somewhat unmeaningful way. |
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