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Please edit my grammar.

English translation: The Landlord has constructed

12:06 Apr 7, 2005
English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO]
Law/Patents - Law: Contract(s)
English term or phrase: Please edit my grammar.
The Landlord has constructed an apartment building on the Land, located at 100/11 LA, USA, hereinafter called "M.A. Club Apartment"
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Please edit my grammar. Thanks.
adda
Selected answer:The Landlord has constructed
Explanation:
an apartment building on the land identified by 100/1 LA, USA, hereinafter referred to as ........

would be my take
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Edith Kelly
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4 +4The Landlord has constructed
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22 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +4
please edit my grammar.
The Landlord has constructed


Explanation:
an apartment building on the land identified by 100/1 LA, USA, hereinafter referred to as ........

would be my take

Edith Kelly
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agree  juvera: 100/11 LA. The name should be ".....Apartments", I should think.
7 mins
  -> Thanks, yes, true
agree  Armorel Young: yes, it's important to take out that first comma
1 hr
agree  Can Altinbay: Yes. "identified as"?
3 hrs
agree  Refugio: Apartments
3 hrs
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26 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
please edit my grammar.
no change


Explanation:
but do not capitalize "land" - that has a specific meaning, and it isn't in the US.

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Note added at 27 mins (2005-04-07 12:33:33 GMT)
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actually you could say \"parcel of land\" or \"property\"

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