Sentence

English translation: re: sentence

09:08 Feb 15, 2006
English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Law/Patents - Law: Contract(s)
English term or phrase: Sentence
This transfer is made with full title guarantee and the land transferred *** is subject to *** any subsiting breach of a condition or tenants' obligation relating to the physical condition of the property which renders the registered lease liable to forfeiture.

I need a rewording.

From a contract for sale.

Thanks in advance.
Empty Whiskey Glass
Local time: 17:12
Selected answer:re: sentence
Explanation:
Hi Wiskey, the paragraph seems correct as is and I don't believe it should present any problem of comprehension even by lay person. The only problem may be the term "subsiting", which may be mispelled and I believe should be "subsisting" and which means (existing)the existence or presence of violations to the terms of the lease.You could rephrase it ""This transfer is made with full title guarantee and the land *** transferred, is subject to *** any existing breach of a condition or tenants' obligations in refrence to physical condition of the property, which makes the registering of the lease liable to forfeiture. hope it helps
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Michael Deliso
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re: sentence


Explanation:
Hi Wiskey, the paragraph seems correct as is and I don't believe it should present any problem of comprehension even by lay person. The only problem may be the term "subsiting", which may be mispelled and I believe should be "subsisting" and which means (existing)the existence or presence of violations to the terms of the lease.You could rephrase it ""This transfer is made with full title guarantee and the land *** transferred, is subject to *** any existing breach of a condition or tenants' obligations in refrence to physical condition of the property, which makes the registering of the lease liable to forfeiture. hope it helps

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agree  zaphod
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agree  William [Bill] Gray
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