You have free Periodix plan. It is limited by 5 widgets. Go premium to get more

English translation: You are currently using the free Periodix plan, limited to 5 widgets. Consider Premium to get more!

13:03 Apr 2, 2015
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English term or phrase: You have free Periodix plan. It is limited by 5 widgets. Go premium to get more
Please proofread, does this sound good? Thank you!
promios
Ukraine
Selected answer:You are currently using the free Periodix plan, limited to 5 widgets. Consider Premium to get more!
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Note added at 8 mins (2015-04-02 13:11:49 GMT)
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Minor correction:
Like Premium, Free should also be capitalized.
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Mikhail Kropotov
Germany
Local time: 14:31
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4 +5You are currently using the free Periodix plan, limited to 5 widgets. Consider Premium to get more!
Mikhail Kropotov


  

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you have free periodix plan. it is limited by 5 widgets. go premium to get more
You are currently using the free Periodix plan, limited to 5 widgets. Consider Premium to get more!


Explanation:
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Note added at 8 mins (2015-04-02 13:11:49 GMT)
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Minor correction:
Like Premium, Free should also be capitalized.

Mikhail Kropotov
Germany
Local time: 14:31
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Russian
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Thank you!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Terry Richards: If the plan is called "Free Periodix" then free should be capitalised. If it is called "Periodix" and it happens to be free then it should not. Also, while "Consider" is not wrong, "Go" is often used in this context. //Then it should be "Periodix Free".
57 mins
  -> Thanks, Terry. I feel Go is a tad too direct and pushy, but of course possible. Also, Periodix is obviously the name of a product or service, so the plans are called Free and Premium, respectively.

agree  writeaway: With Terry. Go is also a tad too idiomatic.
1 hr
  -> "Too idiomatic" -- I'll have to remember that one!

agree  Vinicius Guerreiro
2 hrs

agree  magdadh: If 'Go' is too idiomatic, then 'Consider' is a little weak for a sales pitch. Maybe 'Upgrade to'? Agree with Terry's points on capitalisation.
2 hrs

agree  Alok Tiwari
4 hrs
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