painted on top of that

English translation: We saw the areas of activity painted on top of the gray background which is the functional image ...

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English term or phrase:painted on top of that
Selected answer:We saw the areas of activity painted on top of the gray background which is the functional image ...
Entered by: airmailrpl

15:13 Apr 7, 2020
English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO]
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English term or phrase: painted on top of that
The gray in the background is the functional image of his brain. And painted on top of that we saw these areas of activity.

Can I Inverse the second sentence to start with "we saw..."?

Thanks in advance,
S.J
Canada
Local time: 10:10
We saw the areas of activity painted on top of the gray background which is the functional image ...
Explanation:
rearranging:

We saw the areas of activity painted on top of the gray background which is the functional image of his brain
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airmailrpl
Brazil
Local time: 11:10
Grading comment
Thank you.
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4We saw the areas of activity painted on top of the gray background which is the functional image ...
airmailrpl
3Don't think so
Nikolay Novitskiy


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Don't think so


Explanation:
And we saw these areas of activity painted on top of that. - "That" refers to "activity", not to "brain" now.

And we saw these areas of activity painted on top of his brain. - Perhaps it should be like this.

Nikolay Novitskiy
Russian Federation
Local time: 19:10
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Tony M: Asker's proposed re-write does not change the sense as you say. / In both instances, 'that' in fact refers back to 'the gray in the background'.
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
We saw the areas of activity painted on top of the gray background which is the functional image ...


Explanation:
rearranging:

We saw the areas of activity painted on top of the gray background which is the functional image of his brain

airmailrpl
Brazil
Local time: 11:10
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in PortuguesePortuguese
PRO pts in category: 88
Grading comment
Thank you.
Notes to answerer
Asker: This one looks good. Thank you.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Tina Vonhof (X): Changes the meaning. Puts too much emphasis on 'we saw'.
22 hrs
  -> IYO ??
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