compassion

01:27 Nov 8, 2016 

Moving forward together, not Moving Together. I am really sorry for this mistake. I will check with the native speaker again.

20:56 Nov 7, 2016 

It would seem as though the general consensus her is that eitehr COULD be a correct translation of something, neither is probably fit for your current intended purpose.

"Moving together" works OK as a slogan, though it doesn't seem to bear any relation to the original text; however, it also hardly seems applicable to a power company (unless they supply motive power for trains, say!) — more appropriate probably for something like a removal company.

20:54 Nov 7, 2016 

Yes, I understand what AllegroTrans says. Thank you so much every one to think about my question.

20:47 Nov 7, 2016 

The power of compassion
and The power to be considerate of others
are the translation of the orignal Japanese. I would like to know other native speakers accept them or not.

20:38 Nov 7, 2016 

outside the scope of this forum, asker. This is about original scripting and not translation.

20:27 Nov 7, 2016 

This catch phraze is translated by a native speaker. The original Japanese is used by an electric pewer company like "Inspire the Next" by Hitachi. I would like to propose "Moving Together."

19:59 Nov 7, 2016 

Have you a source text? Or have you been asked to script this from scratch?

17:14 Nov 7, 2016 

I suspect that neither of these is anywhere close to what you need, but they are in fact SO far off the mark, it's difficult to see what you are actually trying to say.

I really don't think you mean that 'power is compassionate' — that would be frankly rather silly for an electric power company!
Possibly what you are trying to say is 'compassionnate power' — we are a compassionate company, so we supply your power with compassion?

However, the problem here is really that the word 'compassion' simply doesn't work with a power company! One might have a person who looks after stray animals who is 'compassionate'; or a person who helps disaster victims... But the notion of 'compassion' really doesn't fit in a corporate context — unless you are trying to say "If you can't pay your bill when it's cold in Winter, then we won't cut your electricity off"!

I think you need to start again from scratch, decide what it is you really want to say, and try again.

Perhaps you could say something like "XYZ — the power company that cares" — but that's pretty lame. "It's all about customer care!" "We care about our customers"... that might be the sort of thing to start you off.

15:10 Nov 7, 2016 

i.e. we don't engage in electrocution? Odd catchphrase for a power company.

08:45 Nov 7, 2016 

The catchphrase is for an electric power company. Is it OK to use "The power of compassion"?