We do Medicare a little better

Spanish translation: Ofrecemos un mejor Medicare

23:25 Oct 20, 2019

English to Spanish translations [Non-PRO]
Medical - Advertising / Public Relations / medicare

English term or phrase: We do Medicare a little better

Please, I need help translating this sentence. Here it is what I have:

- Hacemos Medicare un poco mejor (I'm not sure about the use of the verb hacer: 'hacemos medicare...')
- Hacemos el Medicare un poco mejor
- Hacemos que Medicare sea un poco mejor

Thanks in advance for any help,
Carlos

chgutti
Spain

Spanish translation:Ofrecemos un mejor Medicare

Explanation:
If it's a private insurance company offering to combine services with Medicare, one could assume that they're advertising to, in a way, "improve" the service. This option is more a transcreation than a literal translation because the original makes me think there's a play with words going on.

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Carolina Gazzaneo
Uruguay
Local time: 01:16

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Mejoramos Medicare un poco/aun más

Mariana Serio

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Ofrecemos un mejor Medicare

Carolina Gazzaneo

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peer agreement (net): +2

we do medicare a little better Mejoramos Medicare un poco/aun más

Explanation:
"A little" is a bit weird. I'd use "aun más" if this is a marketing text.

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"Mejoramos su experiencia con Medicare" sounds even better for an ad (if you're allowed to be creative).

Mariana Serio
Argentina
Local time: 01:16
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peer agreement (net): +1

we do medicare a little better

Ofrecemos un mejor Medicare

Carolina Gazzaneo
Uruguay
Local time: 01:16
Native speaker of:

Spanish

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