Brighter Future for All

Hindi translation: सभी के लिए उज्ज्वल भविष्य

14:58 Sep 28, 2018
English to Hindi translations [PRO]
Marketing - Telecom(munications) / Advertising
English term or phrase: Brighter Future for All
This is a tagline for a multicultural advertising campaign.
I know the original English is missing the article "A" but that's the way the client likes it.
Your help is appreciated.
George Rabel
Local time: 03:51
Hindi translation:सभी के लिए उज्ज्वल भविष्य
Explanation:
Saying that all should have a nice future. Brighter future, better prospects.
Selected response from:

Shri Krishna Sharma
India
Local time: 13:21
Grading comment
Choosing your answer based solely on number of peer agreements, as I do not know the language.
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
5 +6सभी के लिए उज्ज्वल भविष्य
Shri Krishna Sharma
5 +2सुनहरा भविष्य – सभी के लिए
Sanjeev Dhadwal
4 +2सभी के लिए अधिक उज्जवल भविष्य
Ashutosh Mitra
4 +1सभी के लिए शानदार भविष्य
Sanjeev Poonia
5सभी के लिए उज्जवल भविष्य / सभी का उज्जवल भविष्य
Ajay Yadav
4उज्ज्वल भविष्य हर किसी के लिए
Mahtab Alam


  

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1 min   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
brighter future for all
सभी के लिए अधिक उज्जवल भविष्य


Explanation:
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Ashutosh Mitra
India
Local time: 13:21
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in HindiHindi, Native in EnglishEnglish
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you very much for your help


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Nitin Goyal
1 min
  -> Thansks Nitinji!

agree  Kunal Jaidka
2 mins
  -> Thansks Kunalji!

neutral  Atiquzzama Khan: अधिक की आवश्यकता नहीं थी।
5 mins
  ->  How will you justify "Brighter", It is not Bright? In a marketing text, you are betting for Better than the competitors...

agree  Rajan Chopra
8 hrs
  -> Thanks Choprji

disagree  alagoudar07: if brighter is translated as अधिक उज्जवल it will be like word to word translation, It has to be something like अत्युत्तम या उन्नत words can be used
15 hrs
  -> And what difference does your suggestion makes, apart from being a cosmetic suggestion? I disagree with your logic and thanks.
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4 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +6
brighter future for all
सभी के लिए उज्ज्वल भविष्य


Explanation:
Saying that all should have a nice future. Brighter future, better prospects.

Example sentence(s):
  • हम सभी के लिए उज्ज्वल भविष्य की कामना करते हैं।
Shri Krishna Sharma
India
Local time: 13:21
Native speaker of: Hindi
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Choosing your answer based solely on number of peer agreements, as I do not know the language.
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you very much for your help


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Atiquzzama Khan
1 min

agree  Ravi sahay
5 mins

agree  Kausar Saiyed (X)
1 hr

agree  Ravindra Godbole
11 hrs

agree  Parvathi Pappu
2 days 19 hrs

agree  Mahtab Alam: सब के लिए एक उज्जवल भविष्य
18 days
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8 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
brighter future for all
सभी के लिए शानदार भविष्य


Explanation:
The word शानदार include every aspect of brightness, positive and strong aspect of something.

Example sentence(s):
  • सभी के लिए शानदार भविष्य का एक बेहतर प्रयास
  • सभी के लिए शानदार भविष्य का एक सपना
Sanjeev Poonia
India
Local time: 13:21
Native speaker of: Native in HindiHindi
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you very much for your help


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  alagoudar07: सभी के लिए बहतर अवसर
15 hrs
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1 day 11 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +2
brighter future for all
सुनहरा भविष्य – सभी के लिए


Explanation:
Hi George,

The translation am tendering is based on the contextual perspective, keeping in mind that this is part of an advert, but not part of a sentence or a paragraph. Moreover, this is a standalone sentence.

Additionally, the client is shunning the 'articles' and the same shall be reflected in Hindi.

This contextual translation when reverse-translated (verbatim) would mean "Golden future for all". Incidentally, the word "Golden future" is prevalently used in the popular culture to denote the forward-looking wish/statement 'better prospects in the future."

सुनहरा भविष्य – सभी के लिए [ Golden prospects – for everyone]. In this version the, anticipated, end-result i.e. the Golden Future is placed first. This is done keeping the fact in perspective that this is a 'Tagline' and not a sentence per se.

सभी के लिए सुनहरा भविष्य, this version presents the text in a sentence form. Reckon, from the advert perspective the earlier one shall be appropriate.

Best,

Sanjeev Dhadwal.

Sanjeev Dhadwal
India
Local time: 13:21
Native speaker of: Native in HindiHindi
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you very much for your help


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Balvir Chand
6 hrs
  -> Balbir Ji! Thanks! for the efforts and time invested in registering the response. Best .

agree  Ashutosh Mitra
7 hrs
  -> Ashutosh Ji! The agreement on the 'context' is humbly appreciated, Thanks. Best.
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1 day 6 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
brighter future for all
सभी के लिए उज्जवल भविष्य / सभी का उज्जवल भविष्य


Explanation:
उज्जवल भविष्य means bright future. As the sayer/author is wishing for bright future to all, so the brighter word is used. 'Brighter' word used in a sense, that all will have more bright future than present. Means they are doing well in present. Brighter word has hidden comparison.

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Note added at 3 days 8 hrs (2018-10-01 23:17:34 GMT) Post-grading
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As the sentence is not complete so it is difficult to get its sense. Sense of sentence will come by what is around that sentence.
I don't know what is underneath of this tagline or it is just like a slogan.
If there are some paragraph, which show relation to this tagline. One suggestion can be this also.

सभी के उज्जवल भविष्य के लिए:
But 'for' is not used before brighter. But it can also be one suggestion.


Example sentence(s):
  • सभी के लिए उज्जवल भविष्य की कामना करता हूँ।
  • सभी का उज्जवल भविष्य होगा/हो
Ajay Yadav
India
Native speaker of: Native in HindiHindi
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you very much for your help

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18 days   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
brighter future for all
उज्ज्वल भविष्य हर किसी के लिए


Explanation:
Above Tagline is targeting every gender, age & culture.

Mahtab Alam
India
Local time: 13:21
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Hindi
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