16:48 Oct 18, 2015 |
English to French translations [Non-PRO] Tech/Engineering - Energy / Power Generation / Electricity demand and supply | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Christian Fournier France Local time: 04:36 | ||||||
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Continue de croître en tant que source d'énergie Explanation: I have a remark as the sentenece is erroneous gramatically sepaking:Electricity demand in country X ************continues to increase***********as the source of energy. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2015-10-18 17:00:55 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- You are totally right as it seems that the text was not written by a native. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2015-10-18 17:01:41 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- They could have said "As the UNIQUE or SOLE source of energy" to give the sentence a semantic trait. |
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poursuit sa croissance (voir ci-après) Explanation: continueS to increase La demande d'électricité en tant que source d'énergie, poursuit sa croissance |
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La demande en électricité, la principale source d'énergie, ne cesse d'augmenter Explanation: Je pense que "the source of energy" doit être traduit par "la principale source d'énergie" |
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vior ci-dessous Explanation: La part de l'électricité dans la demande énergétique continue à croître.... Bine que la phrase me semble mal rédigée, c'est ce que je comprends |
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il y a une demande continuellement croissante pour l'électricité comme source d'energie Explanation: Electricity demand in Country X ***continue to increases as the source of energy*** = Electricity continue to be more and more in demand as source of energy in Country X = There is a continuing increase in electricity being in demand as the source of energy in Country X |
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