inter and intra divisional dependencies

French translation: à l\'intérieur des divisions et entre celles-ci

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English term or phrase:inter and intra divisional dependencies
French translation:à l\'intérieur des divisions et entre celles-ci
Entered by: Evelyne Daniline - Pleckanoff

15:29 Sep 3, 2015
English to French translations [PRO]
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English term or phrase: inter and intra divisional dependencies
Hello,

would 'dépendances au sein des divisions et entre elles' be a suitable translation for 'inter and intra divisional dependencies' in the following sentence:

Inter and intra divisional dependencies are not effectively identified, communicated or managed, leading to an adverse impact on overall divisional or organization wide strategic, financial, and operational or compliance objectives.

Thanks in advance!
Evelyne Daniline - Pleckanoff
Spain
Local time: 14:30
à l'intérieur des divisions et entre celles-ci
Explanation:
I think your suggestion, though correct, still leaves a bit of ambiguity: "au sein des divisions" could be understood as "among", although of course the "et entre elles" alleviates that risk.
Hopefully, my proposed translation makes it crystal clear.
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AbrahamS
United Kingdom
Local time: 13:30
Grading comment
Merci !
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4à l'intérieur des divisions et entre celles-ci
AbrahamS
4les relations de dépendance entre les divisions et au sein de chacune d'entre elles
Francois Boye


  

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à l'intérieur des divisions et entre celles-ci


Explanation:
I think your suggestion, though correct, still leaves a bit of ambiguity: "au sein des divisions" could be understood as "among", although of course the "et entre elles" alleviates that risk.
Hopefully, my proposed translation makes it crystal clear.


AbrahamS
United Kingdom
Local time: 13:30
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PRO pts in category: 32
Grading comment
Merci !
Notes to answerer
Asker: Yes, I think your suggestion is better :) thanks!

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les relations de dépendance entre les divisions et au sein de chacune d'entre elles


Explanation:
my take

Francois Boye
United States
Local time: 08:30
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