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French translation: après suppression de vos coordonnées

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English term or phrase:with personal information redacted
French translation:après suppression de vos coordonnées
Entered by: FX Fraipont (X)

15:34 Sep 17, 2014
English to French translations [PRO]
Law/Patents - Computers: Software / Music
English term or phrase: with personal information redacted
I would like to know what will be the best way to translate this phrase from American English into European French.

It's a translation about Terms of Service of a video service.

Thanks for your help.

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Context:

If you believe that content residing on or accessible through XXXXX infringes a copyright for which you own or are a designated agent, you may send a notice of infringement to Pioneer in accordance with Section 11(coffee) below.
Any notice of infringement must include the information in clauses (i) through below.

Please note that we may post your notification, with personal information redacted, to a clearinghouse such as XXXXX.
yugoslavia
United States
Local time: 11:10
après suppression de vos coordonnées
Explanation:
to redact = to edit = to remove personal information

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Note added at 32 mins (2014-09-17 16:06:26 GMT)
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"to redact : Censor or obscure (part of a text) for legal or security purposes."
http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/english/redact
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FX Fraipont (X)
Belgium
Local time: 17:10
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Summary of answers provided
4 +3après suppression de vos coordonnées
FX Fraipont (X)
4 +2en omettant vos données personnelles
Daryo


Discussion entries: 2





  

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31 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
with personal information redacted.
après suppression de vos coordonnées


Explanation:
to redact = to edit = to remove personal information

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Note added at 32 mins (2014-09-17 16:06:26 GMT)
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"to redact : Censor or obscure (part of a text) for legal or security purposes."
http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/english/redact

FX Fraipont (X)
Belgium
Local time: 17:10
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 499
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Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks FX Fraipont.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  surbeg
1 hr
  -> merci!
agree  Annie Rigler
3 hrs
  -> merci!
agree  B D Finch
1 day 17 hrs
  -> merci!
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
with personal information redacted.
en omettant vos données personnelles


Explanation:
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Note added at 1 hr (2014-09-17 17:03:18 GMT)
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(a) Infringement Notification. If you believe that content residing on or accessible through our website infringes a copyright for which you own or are a designated agent, please send a notice of infringement by fax or regular mail with the information that sets forth the items specified below. Please note that we may post your notification, with personally identifiable information redacted, to a clearinghouse such as chillingeffects.org. To expedite our ability to process your request, please use the following format:
....
https://www.zypr.net/privacy-policy/terms/

sending third parties' personal information to be posted on a site like chillingeffects.org would not be a wise move, and most likely would be illegal anyway, so here "to redact your personal information" must mean "to take it out" / "to omit it", certainly not "to check for accuracy before publishing on the Net"!


Daryo
United Kingdom
Local time: 16:10
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in SerbianSerbian, Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 26
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks Daryo.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  GILLES MEUNIER
1 hr
  -> Merci!
agree  Irene Chalmers Preire
16 hrs
  -> Merci!
neutral  B D Finch: Redaction may be done by removal, but is frequently done by obscuring the redacted words in such a way that they cannot be read.
1 day 17 hrs
  -> in a general case, I would certainly agree; but here it's about posting on a website, they are more likely to simply omit personal info, rather than replace it with black squares like on documents given following FOI requests.
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