"knutselde" "knutselen"

English translation: piece together, cobble together, rigged together

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Dutch term or phrase:\"knutselde\" \"knutselen\"
English translation:piece together, cobble together, rigged together
Entered by: Dave Cooper (X)

15:05 Jan 23, 2011
Dutch to English translations [Non-PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / Not finding American English equivalent ...
Dutch term or phrase: "knutselde" "knutselen"
Here is the Dutch sentence:

"Op een dag knutselde Tom een trampoline voor de slakken in de tuin."

It is a children's book heavily illustrated with full-page drawings of a young lad about 5 years old. It designed for the same kind of audience, and meant to be read aloud.

The word is findable in Van Dale and any dictionary, but for this context, the best translation is always British English: "knock together", "knock up" or "cobble together". These are fine and perfect because Tom cobbles together a trampoline (perhaps from bits and bobs laying about, as a young lad in his situation just might). But, I am not finding an equivalent for American English.

I am looking for same bright, colourful term that is encompassed in the original Dutch and the British English rendering ... but in AMERICAN English, so that to an American reader, the same tone will be conveyed.
Dave Cooper (X)
Netherlands
Local time: 00:44
piece together
Explanation:
With a tad more accent on the piecing part, and I think a 5-year old understands that, or it would just be the right amount of vocabular challenge.

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Note added at 1 hr (2011-01-23 16:52:27 GMT)
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Lianne van de Ven
United States
Local time: 18:44
Grading comment
I would have selected "rigged together" but it was not listed as primary suggestion in bold, so I reckoned I could not. Thanks to everyone though for helping.
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Summary of answers provided
3 +3built
Kate Hudson (X)
3 +2piece together
Lianne van de Ven
3put together
André Linsen
3crafted/concocted/devised
Verginia Ophof
3 -1fabricated / fabricate
Kitty Brussaard


Discussion entries: 10





  

Answers


10 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): -1
fabricated / fabricate


Explanation:
.... :-)

Kitty Brussaard
Netherlands
Local time: 00:44
Native speaker of: Native in DutchDutch

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
disagree  Kate Hudson (X): certainly not the language of a 5 year old.
13 mins
  -> You're absolutely right, I overlooked that part of the information!
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28 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +3
built


Explanation:
Children of this age still have a fairly basic vocabulary. For this age group I would use "built' here as in Tom built a trampoline. Real building work is not done by small kids and small kids know that.

Kate Hudson (X)
Netherlands
Local time: 00:44
Native speaker of: English

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Kitty Brussaard: A safe solution indeed in this context! Perhaps as 'Tom built a trampoline for the snails/slugs in the garden from bits and pieces'.
8 hrs
  -> Thank you - like the 'bits and pieces' too. It's all about children's language.

agree  magnolium
16 hrs
  -> Thank you

agree  M S Kroon: perfect!
26 days
  -> Thank you
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31 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
put together


Explanation:
I think any five year will understand this ;-)

André Linsen
Local time: 00:44
Native speaker of: Native in DutchDutch, Native in FrenchFrench
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +2
piece together


Explanation:
With a tad more accent on the piecing part, and I think a 5-year old understands that, or it would just be the right amount of vocabular challenge.

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Note added at 1 hr (2011-01-23 16:52:27 GMT)
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Lianne van de Ven
United States
Local time: 18:44
Native speaker of: Native in DutchDutch
PRO pts in category: 8
Grading comment
I would have selected "rigged together" but it was not listed as primary suggestion in bold, so I reckoned I could not. Thanks to everyone though for helping.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Barend van Zadelhoff: I like this one. I can retrieve 'knutselen' from 'piece together'. Don't know though whether this is American English, but if it's not exclusively British, it will do as well, I suppose.
2 hrs

agree  Kitty Brussaard: This seems to cover both the process of 'knutselen' and the use of bits and pieces! Can't say if this would be a linguistic challenge for a 5-year old though :-)
6 hrs
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
crafted/concocted/devised


Explanation:
from artsy-crafty

rigged together/ threw together/machinated

Verginia Ophof
Belize
Local time: 16:44
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 8
Notes to answerer
Asker: Verginia ... so far I prefer "rigged together" and Lianne's "piece together" because they come close to the spot-on British "cobble together" ... but they still unfortunately miss the cachet and verve of the British term.

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