to research something from something

English translation: independent research using

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English term or phrase:to research something from something
Selected answer:independent research using
Entered by: B D Finch

16:25 Aug 29, 2019
English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Marketing - Marketing / Market Research
English term or phrase: to research something from something
Are these sentences written in good English?

The study is independently researched from real examples of (XYZ product) users.
Check out this new study, independently researched from real users of (XYZ product).

Thank you so much for your help!
Mikhail Kropotov
Germany
Local time: 22:37
independent research using
Explanation:
No, I think it is very badly written.

It is redundant to use both "study" and "researched". One also does not conduct research "from" a population, but "on" or "based on" a population and "real examples of users" is inept. Are they suggesting that they might be fake examples of users? The research should be carried out on a sample of a defined population (XYZ product users). In fact, given the way it is written, I wouldn't trust the study further than I could throw it.




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Check out this new, independent study based on a sample of actual users.

I think that is a suitable register for advertising, avoids repetition and makes sense (which "real examples of users" does not).
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B D Finch
France
Local time: 22:37
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Thank you very much for your help.
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SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED
4 +4independent research using
B D Finch
4based on research
Patricia Fierro, M. Sc.


Discussion entries: 6





  

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8 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
based on research


Explanation:
Research on which the study is based focused/centered on actual examples of users.

Patricia Fierro, M. Sc.
Ecuador
Local time: 15:37
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  David Moore (X): And now - what was the question?
6 mins

neutral  B D Finch: Probably there was only one study/piece of research.
2 hrs

neutral  Tina Vonhof (X): not much better than the original.
21 hrs
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +4
independent research using


Explanation:
No, I think it is very badly written.

It is redundant to use both "study" and "researched". One also does not conduct research "from" a population, but "on" or "based on" a population and "real examples of users" is inept. Are they suggesting that they might be fake examples of users? The research should be carried out on a sample of a defined population (XYZ product users). In fact, given the way it is written, I wouldn't trust the study further than I could throw it.




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Note added at 3 hrs (2019-08-29 19:31:44 GMT)
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Compare your text with this suggestion:

Check out this new, independent study based on a sample of actual users.

I think that is a suitable register for advertising, avoids repetition and makes sense (which "real examples of users" does not).

B D Finch
France
Local time: 22:37
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 12
Grading comment
Thank you very much for your help.
Notes to answerer
Asker: Your comments make a lot of sense. Thank you!

Asker: It wasn't mine to begin with :) In fact, I had revised it to almost exactly the same before you posted your additional comment.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  philgoddard
2 hrs
  -> Thanks Phil

agree  Yvonne Gallagher
3 hrs
  -> Thanks Yvonne

agree  Tina Vonhof (X)
20 hrs
  -> Thanks Tina

agree  Michael Confais (X)
2 days 15 hrs
  -> Thanks Michael
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