de crear mayor visibilidad

English translation: with the goal of creating greater visibility

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Spanish term or phrase:de crear mayor visibilidad
English translation:with the goal of creating greater visibility
Entered by: Lydianette Soza

15:11 Nov 4, 2018
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
International Org/Dev/Coop / Terms of Reference - Base
Spanish term or phrase: de crear mayor visibilidad
Hola colegas,

Continuo trabajando en los términos de referencia para el levantamiento de una línea de base. Les copio la parte que contiene mi duda:

"Finalmente la audiencia esperada para el informe generado a partir del estudio de referencia son las partes interesadas y los socios a nivel nacional e internacional, con el fin de crear mayor visibilidad y aumentar nuestra influencia con nuestros actores claves, donantes actuales y potenciales."

My try:

Finally, the intended/target audience of the report to be prepared from the reference study includes interested parties and national- and international- level partners in order to make it more visible and extend our influence on our key stakeholders, and current and prospective donors.

Mi consulta es porque creo que estoy perdiendo el sujeto en "crear mayor visibilidad".

De antemano, gracias por su invaluable colaboración.
Lydianette Soza
Belize
Local time: 10:42
with the goal of creating greater visibility
Explanation:
Another option that addresses all of the original phrase's elements.
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Barbara Cochran, MFA
United States
Local time: 12:42
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Summary of answers provided
5 +3with the goal of creating greater visibility
Barbara Cochran, MFA
5with the aim of creating visibility
Lisa McCarthy
5thus creating greater visibility
MONICA DIAZ
3aimed at generating greater exposure
David Hollywood


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22 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +3
with the goal of creating greater visibility


Explanation:
Another option that addresses all of the original phrase's elements.

Barbara Cochran, MFA
United States
Local time: 12:42
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 16

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  philgoddard
27 mins

agree  Maria Iglesia Ramos
2 hrs
  -> Gracias, Maria.

agree  Muriel Vasconcellos
5 hrs
  -> Thank you, Muriel.
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5 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
with the aim of creating visibility


Explanation:
You may need to rephrase the first part of the sentence.

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Note added at 3 horas (2018-11-04 18:43:15 GMT)
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Ups! I forgot the 'greater' part.

Lisa McCarthy
Spain
Local time: 18:42
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 36
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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
aimed at generating greater exposure


Explanation:
bit late in on this one but that's what I would say,,,

David Hollywood
Local time: 13:42
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Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 104
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11 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
thus creating greater visibility


Explanation:
Asi es como yo lo diria:

Finally, the intended audience of the reference study report includes interested parties as well as national and international level partners, thus creating more visibility and extending our influence on key stakeholders and current and prospective donors.

MONICA DIAZ
United States
Local time: 09:42
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish
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