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10:45 Aug 27, 2017 |
German to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Transport / Transportation / Shipping | |||||||
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4 +1 | Where do we stand (as a company)? |
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4 | Where are we now? |
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3 | How is X positioned? |
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How is X positioned? Explanation: I don't think it is meant in a strictly geographical sense, but rather relative to the competition. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 6 hrs (2017-08-27 16:52:32 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- The follow up would then be "Where do we go from here?" |
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Where do we stand (as a company)? Explanation: I would prefer the first person plural over the third person. Sounds better in English. |
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Where are we now? Explanation: The first and second of these headings are third person, but then there is a shift to first person plural. Whoever wrote your source text was stylistically inconsistent, but that doesn't mean you have to be. Heading 3 clearly shows that the document is being released by the company itself, therefore the name of the company is self-evident. Where are we now? Where do we go next? What do our customers expect from us? |
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