de la cual vamos saliendo los dos hechos pedazos

English translation: that is tearing us (in)to pieces

21:36 Mar 27, 2017
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
Spanish term or phrase: de la cual vamos saliendo los dos hechos pedazos
Está furiosa y desarticulada y abatida; el cerebro le estalló en pedazos y para ayudarla a recomponerlo sólo puedo guiarme por la brújula de mi amor por ella, mi inmenso amor por ella, pero esa brújula hoy por hoy es incierta porque me cuesta quererla, por momentos me cuesta mucho porque mi Agustina no está amable ni parece quererme ya, y me ha declarado una guerra a dentelladas de la cual vamos saliendo los dos hechos pedazos.
Lorena Zuniga
Costa Rica
Local time: 14:59
English translation:that is tearing us (in)to pieces
Explanation:
important to stress that this is still uunderway
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Albion Land
Spain
Local time: 22:59
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Summary of answers provided
5 +2that is tearing us (in)to pieces
Albion Land
4that has left us both broken to pieces
Charlie Higgins
3that has left us both utterly destroyed
Barbara Cochran, MFA
3that is shattering us both
Ana Vozone
3which has made wrecks of the both of us
Robert Forstag


  

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that has left us both broken to pieces


Explanation:
one option. the result of the "guerra a dentelladas"

Example sentence(s):
  • Moses is a man who has been deeply damaged, as we all have, we can all identify parts of our lives which have left us broken to pieces.

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Charlie Higgins
United States
Local time: 16:59
Native speaker of: English
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that has left us both utterly destroyed


Explanation:
Menos literal, pero, de todos modos, creo que es el sentido.

Barbara Cochran, MFA
United States
Local time: 16:59
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that is shattering us both


Explanation:
Another slightly different, less literal suggestion.

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Ana Vozone
Local time: 21:59
Native speaker of: Native in PortuguesePortuguese
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which has made wrecks of the both of us


Explanation:
Or:

which has worn out the both of us

I don't think "hecho pedazos" implies the kind of emotional meltdown suggested by "shattering" or "breaking into pieces."

Robert Forstag
United States
Local time: 16:59
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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +2
that is tearing us (in)to pieces


Explanation:
important to stress that this is still uunderway

Albion Land
Spain
Local time: 22:59
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Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 19
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agree  franglish: that is tearing us apart
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agree  Marian Vieyra: tearing us apart...
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