@ Asker 06:17 Mar 23, 2017
Yes, it would indeed have helped to give us the ENTIRE menu item in the first place.
To start with, if you have only Emmental and croutons etc., I certainly wouldn't say 'with a serving of...' — to me, that's far too much prominence to give to a mere accompaniment; you could quite literally leave out any conjunction and just put a comma, as is often done in French too.
Surely your priority is to get the key part of the menu item expressed correctly, and then work around that? | 
peer agreement (net): +3