12:21 Nov 16, 2016 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Religion / About the book of Ecclesiastes | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Yvonne Gallagher Ireland Local time: 01:40 | ||||||
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draws a path between units Explanation: Writing is unidirectional: the "unifying plot line" draws a path and drives the reader through the units, this is not only a link but an order, a sequence of items that are to be visited one after the other |
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arranges/forms the units together Explanation: My proposal. |
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synthesizes complementary viewpoints Explanation: Proverbs has few, if any, "units"; rather, you're looking at complementary thought patterns and doctrinal contributions bound into specific moralistic intents and purposes |
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links or connects all the units Explanation: the "unifying plot line" along with the signposting elements of the "transitions between units" such as: “so I turned to consider,” “again I saw,” “then I saw, connect or link all the units -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 52 mins (2016-11-16 13:14:03 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- it also says that the "proverbs are molded into clusters" and that the "units fall into the three categories of recollections, reflections, and mood pieces" so, all these units are linked or connected -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 9 days (2016-11-26 11:46:11 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- glad to have helped |
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